Subject: [FFML] Various and Sundry Comments
From: Jerico Mele
Date: 12/6/1999, 8:34 PM
To: fanfic mailing list

happy happy joy joy- oh, sorry, rereading surReal World.

re: [FFML] [TM][fanfic]Sketches of Tenchi 3: Complicating the Plot and
parts one and two
Author: Bert Miller (bert.miller@unisys.com)
Comments: This is an excellent fic. Characters are in character
(especially tricky considering the plot of the fic) and the dialouge and
mannerisms of each character are all intact. The plotting is good, with
more than enough plot density per part. And the premise is generally
consistant with how I'd imagine Tenchi would resolve this issue. I look
forward to each part more and more.
Highly Recommended

Re: [FFML] [FF][UY] Secret Agent 004
By: Damien (damien searight@msn.com
Comments: I must confess to only a passing knowledge of UY (mostly
vicariously through The surReal world(ha, mentioned it again)) but I
like where this is going. Must be the 15 Days of Bond I just got done
with(thank you TBS!). The characters are interesting and the plot has
plenty of room to expand. 
Recommended (for Bond and UY fans alike)

Re: [FFML] [Key][Ruxpin] Ruxpin: The Metal Idol
By: the supremely demented Aaron Shattuck (dilandau2@hotmail.com)
Comments: I'm not sure what the author was on, but if he could mail me
some at a reasonable rate...This might just be the strangest premise and
execution I've ever seen in a fanfic. The prose is excellent, the
settings and characters bizzare in a slightly more infantile manner than
Key's are and I nearly damaged something while reading it. As of right
now I still can't find my spleen, but then who needs that deadbeat
organ?
Recommended (proper appreciation for the sickly bizzare will definately
help your appreciation of this fic, and hopefully the next part?)

Re: [FFML] [Teaser/Prologue][Tenchi/Star Wars X-over]
By: Jeremy Evans (ianmakabe@hotmailcom)
Comment: Interesting premise. I've seen a couple of Tenchi/SW crossover
attempts and this one has by far the best premise of any of them. A
couple of things you should work out before continuing: when in the SW
chronology is this taking place? how does Jurai fit into the galactic
order? As to where it should go past the planning stage I could
recommend the old standby: bring in a villianous plot (preferably aimed
at characters from both series) and the villian behind it. If you make
the plot and the villian good enough, no one will mind.
You can't really recommend a trailer/teaser, but based on this I hope to
see the fic.

Jerico


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