Subject: [FFML] Re: [SM/Ranma] Children of Fire #5
From: Rhea Seraph
Date: 12/7/1999, 9:08 PM
To: David Johnston
CC: ffml@fanfic.com

On Tue, 7 Dec 1999, David Johnston wrote:


      Ryouga stepped out of the bathroom.  Why is
Saotome taking so long to get home from school, he asked

Questions need question marks.  Actually though if you 
are not going to put any kind of markers on thoughts, it
is more effective to leave out the "he asked himself"

If I didn't have the he asked himself, I'd put a question mark, but
putting one inside a sentence without quotes always looks wonky to me.


Where's the be...the charcoal?"  Damn my mouth, he

That didn't work.  

It's a pity that Setsuna isn't going win.  I always liked
her. 

I like her too.
 
      Kunou put down the packages and drew his bokken.
"I shall avenge this insult against thee, my aqua haired
maiden."  He charged down the street towards the parking
lot.

"aqua-haired"

Kuno's characterisation is particularly appealing showing
how, despite his dementia, he could have been the big man
on campus before Ranma showed up.  I wonder whether Michiru

Thanks!

will respect him more when it is revealed that there really
was black sorcery being used at the race.  

Yes, she'll be wondering how he knew too :)
 
Did Jackie Chan play both parts?

Heh.  I imagined it as a film combining live action with animation.

John Biles
Emperor of all He Surveys
http://www.tass.org/~rhea/falcon.html

"He who breaks a thing to find out what it is, has left the path of
wisdom."
     -Gandalf 



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