I enjoyed this so far, (I'm a sucker for ALT-Ranma fics) but I'm curious as to where you're going to go with this. As others have stated in greater length than I will, it doesn't leave a whole lot of room for conflict, meaning I can't really see how this is going to be all that interesting. However, I'm willing to trust in your talent to pull this off, so I reserve judgement.

 Ja Ne!

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