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From: "Richard Robinson" <RICHARDROBINSONJR@prodigy.net>
To: "Kevin D. Hammel" <kevinsff@pacbell.net>; "fanfic list FFML"
<ffml@fanfic.com>
Sent: Monday, December 27, 1999 7:48 PM
Subject: [FFML] Re: [c&c][xover][Ranma/SM] Honor and Love 7
<snip of text from posted story>
You know other than Gregg Sharp, I don't think I have seen any
stories, on the list, that use an INTACT Tendo family.
Well, "Children of Fire" comes quite close to intact, actually.
Now the CHARACTERS, on the other hand...
<Snip suggestion for Gregg Sharp>
The crone hopped to the door using her staff with speed that surprised
Neptune. "Pleased to meet you. I am Elder Cologne of the Joketsuzoku
Amazons."
If she and Ranma go to work on the Sailors, they will be doing
wonders. Stuff they never did in the show.
Yes. Who knows WHAT might happen?
Can't anyone picture Usagi
doing a Hiryu Shoten Ha or a splitting Cat Hairs ( and the look on
Luna's face when she hears the name!)
And who knows WHAT people might learn? (That is IF Usagi can drag
herself out of bed to practice...)
"Someday, I'll have my revenge on you, I swear!" Kikuko's assailant
Why does she want to have revenge on Kikuko? Ranma, I could see but
Kikuko?
Perhaps I should rework this scene. It's already been rewritten once
It used to go into the whole history of Ukyou and Ranma. etc.
Ukyo seems a little more out of it here, than usual.
Okay... Could any more specificity be offered?
Thanks for commenting!
Kevin D. Hammel
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