I liked it and would like to see more in kind.  My only real comment
(apart from that I liked it :) is that I thought to speak is hanashite
not iimashite (or whichever form you are using at the time.)  I'll 
admit its been a few years since I took my year of Japanese, and my
skills are definitely rusty.  I guess I'll have to hit the books.

And (in reference to the prevoius reply) I liek Sukino Usagi more..
(love bunny) :)
 
-Rain


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