Subject: [FFML] Re: [SM][Pokemon] Sailor Pokemon,part 1
From: MinakoRei@aol.com
Date: 1/28/2000, 6:53 PM
To: epoch@texas.net, ffml@fanfic.com

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The fluid drained away,and the tube fell away,revealing a man. "Ah,"
 he said. "Good. You are awake." The man wore a white coat. "Allow me
 to introduce myself. I am Dr. Tomoe,head of this project."
 
 "Project?" The voice was raspy,unfamiliar,but so good.
 
 "Yes. You see,young lady,you are one of ten people who were chosen to
 be part of a special experiment to infuse Pokemon DNA into human cells,
 thus creating humans who can call on the powers of Pokemon. You were
 lucky - you and the others had been infused with incurable illness,and
 would have died had we not saved you."
 
 "You...saved me?" asked the girl,looking at her lithe hands. She then
 saw that she was naked,but felt no shame. She touched her breasts.
 
 "Oh yes! We used our technology to clone you. You are a clone of the
 former human. We infused Pokemon DNA into your cells. In other words,
 you were 'reborn',so to speak." He checked the plaque. "Amy Anderson."
 
 The navy-haired,blue-eyed girl slowly stepped from the tube,then began
 to swoon. Tomoe caught her and put her in a chair nearby. "Steady. You
 are still a bit woozy from your rebirth." He then turned to another tube
 and opened it. While he was doing so,Amy looked at the tablet.
 
 On it were two pictures. Amy's brain began to focus,recognizing the
 photos. "Squirtle...Starmie..." she muttered

 "Yes,Amy,Starmie's psychic-elemental type makes you super smart,and
 both have water-type attacks,so you can utilize water attacks." 

Good desicion. Starmie and Squirtle fit Amy's personality. Wise 
desicion...Though, I think maybe a vaporeon rather than a squirtle would have 
been slightly better.
  
 He opened the tube and pulled out a tall naked girl with brown hair.
 "Meet your friend,Lita," he said,putting the still-unconscious girl
 on a cot. He showed a picture to Amy. "As you see,we infused the DNA
 of a Pikachu and a Hitmonchan into her new body,giving her powers of
 thunder and lightning,as well as immense strength."

Pikachu and Hitmonchan, do have attributes towards Lita. Pikachan!
  
 "Mmmm..." said Amy,holding her head.
 
 The girl,Lita,woke up and moaned. "Where am I?" she murmured.
 
 "Wake up,Lita Glenn," said Tomoe.
 
 "Where the hell am I?" said Lita,looking about. She then saw her
 nudity. "Why the hell am I frickin' naked?!"
 
 "You were bitten by a rabid Raticate in a bar brawl," said Tomoe.
 "You almost died,but we took your last good flesh and cloned you.
 Your old self is buried,but you are now reborn with Pokemon powers."
 
 "The hell...?" Lita was so confused.

I don't think Lita needs to be so vulgar.
  
 Tomoe handed the two girls some clothes,school uniforms from Amy's
 standpoint. Lita's was a bit larger,a chocolate-brown colored suit.
 "I'm sure you have questions. You see,you two are Pokemon-enhanced
 humans,given new powers and abilities through the infusion of genes
 taken from Pokemon. Amy,you are part Squirtle and Mew. Lita,you are
 part Pikachu and Machop. Our goal is to create a colony of human-
 Pokemon so that they can make the world a better place for both the
 humans and the Pokemon - there will be no more trainer conflict,for
 Pokemon matches will be fought without using Pokemon - the people
 will spar in a type of martial arts. While this threatens the danger
 of violent acts,this will allow things like the Mewtwo incident to
 be a thing of the past,for Pokemon will not be caught anymore."

Now...here I'm confused. I thought Ami was part squirtle and part starmie and 
Lita 
was part Pikachu and part Hitmonchan....

<snip>
"All of you,introduce yourself and your DNA-types."
 
 One of the blondes,who wore her hair like a Jigglypuff's ears,leapt
 up and shook their hands. "I'm Serena Lunere! I have the DNA of a
 Clefairy and a Snorlax. I don't know why the Snorlax was there."

Here...try Clefairy's ears, and Snorlax....LMAO!!!!!!!

 "Maybe that's why you're such a sleepyhead," laughed a ebony-hair vixen.
 
 "You're so mean!" snarled Serena,sticking her tongue out at her.
 
 "My name's Raye Blaze," said Raye,brushing back her long black hair.
 "I happen to have the DNA of a Vulpix,so I can use fire and am pretty."

cute...though vain.
  
 "She has the DNA of a Charizard too,so she's hot-tempered," said Serena.

there, that's more like Raye
  
 "Take that back,meatball head!" screamed Raye.

now...she's not a meatball head anymore, so improve on that.
  
 "Will not!"
 
 "Ahem," said the Professor,sweatdropping. "Will the others speak?"
 
 Another blonde stood. "I'm Mina Erosa,and I have the DNA of a Jigglypuff
 and a Chansey,so I'm very helpful."

Intersting...
  
 "And she always messes things up," teased Serena.
 
 "Shut up,Serena," said Mina coldly.
 
 "And who are the boys?" asked Lita,pointing to another group.
 
 "Those are your male counterparts,Lita," said the Professor. "Greg Alare
 has the DNA of a Kadabra and Jynx,so he has ice and psychic powers. The
 older man,Darien Aegis,has a Vileplume/Sandshrew DNA combo,so he's got
 powers connected to the earth and plants. He loves roses a lot."

Where's Ken? You know...Lita's "Rainy Day Man"
  
 "Oh,romantic," said Lita in awe.
 
 "The two older girls are lesbians," said Tomoe with a sad sigh. He
 pointed to a green-haired girl and a yellow tomboy. "The wavy-haired
 one is Michiru Tidus,and she has the DNA of a Dewgong and Seaking.
 That makes her skilled over water,like you Amy,but with more power."
 
 "Oh..." said Amy.
 
 "She tends to take to creative things,the opposite of you. The other
 girl is Haruka Skye,and he has the DNA of a Fearow and Pidgeotto,so
 he's skilled in wind-type attacks like Whirlwind and Gust."

good choices for Haruka and Michiru. I like it.
  
 "I see," said Lita. "She's pretty cool,for a lesbo."
 
 "Lita!" scolded Amy. She then noticed a young black-haired girl.
 "Who's that,professor? She looks so pale."
 
 "That is my daughter,Hotaru," said Tomoe sadly. "She had died while
 visit the lab where Mewtwo was born,so I took her DNA and infused
 some of Mew's DNA as well as a bit of Ditto's DNA. She has psychic
 powers and can transform into any Pokemon or human."
 
Well...I think you over did the psychic powers a bit, but it does fit. But 
ditto is not that...well..right. Hotaru is more a healer so try Chansey.
<snip>
That's my input!


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