Subject: [FFML] Re: [Fanfic][Ranma] Centaur chapter 2.5: The Pineapples of Defeat
From: "Gary Kleppe" <kleppe@mediaone.net>
Date: 2/14/2000, 1:39 PM
To: ffml@fanfic.com

Vincent Seifert wrote:

    "What's the big deal about Furinkan?  It's not like they
have much of a martial arts rhythmic gymnastics team...."  Ranma
gave Akane, up to her neck in steaming water on the other side of
the furo, a puzzled look.

    Akane returned him a worried look.  "Not that.  The match is

Suggest not repeating 'look.'

Well, actually that was intentional... didn't work for you, I take it.

Not as written. Maybe if the last bit said 'Akane, in turn, gave....'

    This time "drat" just didn't cover it.  *His will is so
strong, to resist the drug so!*  For a moment Kodachi considered
suggesting to Ranma that she was Akane, but then her pride tore
the notion down and trampled on it; that way lay utter defeat.

Hey, Asuka would've done it. :)

Reference escapes me, sorry... Asuka from NGE?  I haven't seen that yet.

Neither have I. I was talking about Kodachi's rival from vol. 33, as you
seem to have realized five minutes after you wrote this reply. :)

    "Push the button, Akane," Ranma said, grinning.

"I will."

"Just push the button!"

"I WILL push the button."

"Make one of these...."

"I will."

Darn.  Another over-my-head reference... but then, the reference *I* was
making, to "The Great Race" ("Push the button, Max!") is probably too
obscure these days...

I've never seen that; my reference was to Mystery Science Theater 3000
("Push the Button, Frank!") specifically the "Sidehackers" ending. They
may have gotten the running "Push the button" joke from "The Great
Race," for all I know.

Actually, I think the Principal would be laughing hysterically at this.
He likes a good joke, even when it's on him. :) Besides, think of all
the students who'll have to work overtime fixing his office.

Good point.  How about a receding cry of "Auwe!" followed by hysterical
laughter, then?

Yeah, that sounds good.


Gary



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