"Douglas MacDougall" <dougmacd@dougmacd.net> wrote:
Yes, she'd have a GREAT deal of fun experimenting with this little
baby. Now all she had to do was visit talk to Mrs. Hinamoto's kid in
'visit' or 'talk to.' Pick one. :)
After an hour and a half of searching the streets for vendors and
vending machines that sold sake, beer, or any other sort of booze, there
was still no sign of anybody with Mr. Tendo's height or his old man's
girth.
That sounds like it's Tendo's old man he's talking about. Maybe if you
reversed it it would help: 'with his old man's girth or Mr. Tendo's...'
Surprised, Ranma released the other boy, who took a few moments to
recover. "So you finally figured it out? Wait, I thought you lost all
your proof." The little test Akira had arranged to 'prove' that Ranma's
curse affected his mind had ended with something of a disaster. Akane
had managed to knock him, a lie detector, and a series of photographs
into a mess on the floor.
Yes, yes, we've read the synopsis. :)
We walked quickly out of sight, before Mrs. Za could think up any
errands for Rei to do while he was out.
Good thing that in Chinese, the family names come first; otherwise you'd
be facing damnation for the pun in this guy's name. :)
I never got his response, as he turned a fled from me. I worried
turned and fled
Fortunately, I knew a bit more about martial arts than he. Which
only means that he knew next to nothing. Raised as a traditional Amazon
male, he learned how to watch over and maintain the home. On the other
hand, my father had tried to teach me swordplay. I never learned any
techniques, but I remembered some of the principals.
Dat's 'principles,' keiki.
With no more warning, he tried to kick me in the crotch. I quickly
let go of him and desperately swatted the leg away. Instead of it's
its
"What, did you fall in Spring of Drowned Angry-at-the-World Amazon,
or something?" I felt my back press against a rock face. I glanced to
either side to see another way around, but there was none. I had
retreated into the end of the valley; there was no where else left for
nowhere (1 word)
"You can keep me pinned here, but what makes you think you can take
me home?" He stared at me challengingly. "You haven't beaten me, yet."
The corner of her mouth turned up into a smirk.
His? You use male pronouns for nyu-Rei everywhere else.
Maybe a bath would be better. Although she did have one before
she had had one before
Akane barked, "And who's fault is that?"
whose
Did something happen last night while they were alone? Maybe she
should have stayed outside their room longer to make sure the Saotome's
Saotomes
As soon as they finished breakfast, Akane grabbed Akira's pants, and
ran out the door, pulling Ranma beside her with the crook of her arm.
With mask of complete determination, she set off for school. The
With a mask
I'm sorry to see this series go; it's been one of the funnier things out
there. But I guess it's not ending, merely moving on to something else.
(If that curse form we saw a glimpse of is a certain bass drum-pounding
rabbit, though, I'm gonna have to hurt ya.)
The revelations of Akira's past were very interesting, though I think it
would've worked better to show them bit by bit over many chapters,
rather than keeping everything completely secret and dumping it on us in
one lump sum.
Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics.html