Subject: [FFML] Re: [FFML][C&C]The Synopses List Review for February 11
From: "Douglas A. Reeves" <stormwalker@airmail.net>
Date: 2/18/2000, 6:31 PM
To:

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Title: Cry of the Phoenix
Chapter: 2 - Transition
Series: Bubblegum Crisis
Author: Stormwalker (Douglas A. Reeves)
Email: dreeves@speakeasy.org (or for a while longer,
stormwalker@airmail.net)
Homepage: http://web2.airmail.net/a0011387
Archived At: Not at present.  Email me for a copy.

Date Sent to FFML: 2/12/00

Series Summary:

It's 2036, two years after the death of Linna Yamazaki during a raid
on a GENOM research facility.  Linna is lost, Priss has disappeared
into a hell of her own making, and without the Knight Sabers, the
world is a much darker place.  Now, though, the embers of hope have
been fanned by the return of one long lost...

Episode Summary:

Nene's new standing in AD Police generates quite a surprise for the
newly-returned Priss, and also produces some unexpected complications.
Also, Sylia begins to set the stage for the renewal of her crusade.

Review:

I seem to remember ... well... I heard you retired, Stormwalker.

I did... but I missed it too much, so I came back.  The storyteller in me
wouldn't let me give it up.

Well, it seems quite appropriate that your return was heralded by this
piece,
one of the best BGC fics I've seen come down the pike in quite awhile.
The formatting and grammar was adequate, though I might have ignored
them with the great prose you weave. Keep it up, this particular baby
I'll be watching.

Thank you... I'm glad you've enjoyed it thus far.

My prereaders deserve a lot of the credit... partly for finding all the
little things that could be imporved, and partly for motivating me to keep
writing.

And, oh, I managed to read the SM fic you released... you'll continue it
or
I'll have to hurt you. ^_^

Well... we couldn't have that, could we?  Don't worry... I'm still working
on it, though it's a little lower on the priority stack than Cry of the
Phoenix.  (Phoenix is one of those stories that keeps me up at night begging
to be written).





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