Very good...i would rally like to see this continued. if you like i can be
prereader?
some points im not see clear about:
Pendragon- if im not mistaken his King Arthur right? if so then is the
Uther they were talking about his father, Uther Pendragon or an entirely
different person?
So if im interpreting this right Ranma is Uther and man's only hope. My
question why is it like that? there are lots of people who are as skilled
or maybe better than Ranma.
Here are a few examples:
Cologne and Happosai-They are of course extremley skilled martial artists,
and despite all theire scheming and faults they're not evil.
Taro-his easily a match for Ranma to say nothing of his cursed form. He's
also not evil his only target is Happosai. And im sure they can settle
their differences if its to save the world.
Ryoga - Ranma's faster he's stronger and tougher. and despite contrary
beleif i think his ranma's equal if he can only control his anger. Also the
Darkness will have a hard time of tracking him down...
Saffron, Herb, Mint, Lime etc- They are all extremely powerful and will do
anything to protect their homeland.
All in all a very good idea. If done correctly and you get rid of that of
the script style of writing, and im sure many will disagree with this, itc
an turn out to be a very good fic right up there with Alan Harnum's Waters
under Earth.
Laurence Roxas