Since the Elsa Synopsis Review Board is back in session, that means it's
time to respond:
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Title: Vacation Days chapter 9
Genre: Original Flavor
Author: D.B. Sommer
Review:
Tenchi fics are, as said by an earlier ranter, quite rare.
Not exactly. I think it's number three behind Ranma and Sailor Moon.
Curiously, not many are posted to the FFML, but if one goes to Gensao's
Tenchi fanfic archive, a slew of Tenchi fics reside there. Some are even
quite good, from what I understand (haven't had time to look through them
on my own) It even has a voter's poll and the results can be viewed if you
want to save time and look over what most people feel are the best TM fics
on the archive.
And as was
mentioned in the rant, Vacation Days is a drop in the bucket.
Better than being called a drip, I guess.
But what a drop.
One of the most excellent pieces of Tenchi fanfiction by a fellow not
named
KaraOhki
Didn't know Kara used to write TM! fics.
or Happosai, this is a fic that had me looking for earlier chapters
when I first got a copy of Chapter 3.
What, you mean you don't automatically read everything I write? Shame,
shame on you, Elsa. I thought I taught you better than that. ^_^
Grammar and syntax are no problem, but as everyon who I ever worked with
knows, the good enough story often distracts me from slight grammatical
errors and syntax problems.
Thanks. Glad you've liked it so far.
And D.B. .... your cliffhangers make me wanna go over to the US and
throttle you !!!! ^_-
I see. If I told you I've delayed beginning the final chapter because I'm
writing another fic, would you come over and throttle me then? I've felt my
paranoia level slipping and need a reason to start looking over my shoulder
again. ^_^
Thanks for the review.
D.B. Sommer