Hello everyone,
Those of you who have visited my webpage recently know that I am in
the process of rewriting my large serial _Ascent of the Fallen_. I am
presently about halfway through that project, and I should be done by
the end of the month. As I am approaching the final draft, I would
like to have a few more people to pre-read the revised version. So
far, Disaster has pre-read every part and offered his suggestions (and
he's done an excellent job), but I want to have a little more input
before I release. I would like about three pre-readers, but am willing
to take more if there is high demand. That being unlikely, I'll stick
with three.
I would like people to read the rewritten parts for:
--mechanics (grammar and spelling)
--style (tone, word choice, clarity)
--plot analysis (clarity of action, believability)
--thematic development
--characterization
You can read the original version at my website (URL in sig) to see if
you're interested--the revision follows essentially the same
storyline.
If you decide you would like to do this, you would earn my eternal
gratitude, your name in lights (on my webpage), and a cookie*. If this
appeals to you, please send an e-mail to sparky@virginia.edu to let me
know.
That's sparky@virginia.edu and nowhere else. DO NOT reply to the list,
DO NOT send the e-mail to sparkster@writeme.com, DO NOT pass Go, DO
NOT collect $200.
I'll shut up now.
Sparky
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cookie.
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