From: "Trevor Hoffert" <battlekrome@hotmail.com>
To: sonny_taing@hotmail.com
Subject: Re: [FFML] Re: [C&C] Re: R1/2 and Eva fusion(kinda)
Date: Wed, 22 Mar 2000 18:03:43 PST

>From: "Sonny Taing" <sonny_taing@hotmail.com>
>To: FFML@fanfic.com
>Subject: [FFML] Re: [C&C] Re: R1/2 and Eva fusion(kinda)
>Date: Wed, 22 Mar 2000 15:34:53 PST
<snip>
>>>Prologue:
>>>
>>>    Kaos, god of crossovers and fusion�s, first class, unlimited, was board.
>>
>>my my he looks really wooden to me
>>also try for a better name. Also I think Old Cattie from the Bet has that
>>title
>Really? Guess I have to reseach abit more.
<snip>
>>>Just then Moon Pie, the Goddess of fate, 3rd class, limited, came behind
>>>him, �What are you doing Daddy?� The young 14-year old goddess called out
>>>to
>>>her father.
>>Goddess of fate? more like Goddess of Comic Relief
>>and no I'm not talkin about Whoopi Goldberg
>Yea I guess she was a bit young for that but I'll keep her there till
>engough people want her to go.
you don't need to take her out just call her the Goddess of Comic Relief (call a spade a spade)

COme on, she desverse better than that, how about Goddess of really cute things that make your teeth rot?

<snip>
>>umm... go watch the first ep again
>Can't, don't have any money, to rent the tape.
where do you live??
anywhere near Canada?

L.A> you not nice person, you!

<snip>
>>Also considering A: shinji is a wimp
>>and B: shinji is a wimp
>>now I know that these are technically only one thing I though that it was
>>so
>>important that is was worth mentioning twice
>There going to be surpises because of Ranma curse.
ok then
>>>    With a sound of boom behind the angle was� not damaged in the least.
>>a N2 mine doing a boom?? N2 mines rate at least a Ka-Boom maybe even
>>a KA-BOOM
???                              ***

YOU worte it not me.

<snip>                    ***
>>>
>>>�Well that wasn�t supposed to happen,� Kaos said as he looked over Ranma.
>>>
>>>�Daddy, I�m going on a date.�
>>>
>>>�With who, Moon Pie?�
>>>
>>>�Aturu Morabishi.�
who next? Happosai?

Eww!!! Nah, maybe somebody else.

>>>All he did was blink blinked.
>>i believe it's called a double blink
>Really? Cause I saw a lot of blink blinked in some fanfics.
blink blinked is more onamatapiea
double blinked is description

Oh, that really explains it.

>>>           �This thing is too baggy!� Ranma said behind the screen.
>>>
>>>           �There�re a button on your left armpit.� Misato replied
>>>helpfully.
>>armpit?
>>ARMPIT???
>>watch the ep again
>Opps... where is it again?
located on right wrist
for pump up from magma dive ep it on left

Thanks.

>>>            �And what�s this stuff that attached to my suit?�
>>>
>>>           *  It�s going to be a long day. * �Well Shinji, that�s the��
ah yes the attachments
the funny thing is from what i've seen It never mentions whether
there is or isn't attachments in the plug suits
<snip>

Got the thing from Fire.

>>he turned back into a guy where??
????

That will be fixed... sometime if I want to.

<snip>
>>>See ya.
>>
>>basically go watch EVA for specifics as to the first ep
>>and well proof read alot
>>spellcheckers work half-decently but
>>some words are words but not the ones you want
pre readers you can get aplenty
reply's from said pre readers sometimes doubtful
>YES SIR! Seriosuly though, I going to need prereaders and a website that has
>the scirpts or something that list what happened in each ep. ANybody know?

As for the scirpts I got somebody, so yay!

>(And if you're wondering, it's because a 15, doesn't really have any money,
>if he dosen't have a job.>
heh when I was 15 I had a job

What working at Burger King? Just kidding, but I live near L.A. and you have to be like 16 or 17 in most places to even be considered.

<snip>
what no Sig yet, Sonny Taing?
or website?

Hey, I only been doing this for a couple months now... and writing fanfics for about a months. BUt how about PU TANG PIE?

I'm outtie now.

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