On Sat, 1 Apr 2000, KaraOhki wrote:
"Sorry, Ranchan. But this is for your own good." Ukyou grunted
from exertion as she dragged Ranma up the stairway to her room.
"When you
wake up, you'll have consummated your marriage to your cute fiancee,
and you
won't have to take Akane's abuse anymore."
She's got to be kidding...he'll run as fast as he can. :)
Evidently, Ranma doesn't ascribe to the same logical schools of thought
that everyone else does. ^_^
It was during a vicious kick to her side by Akane while she
exploded within their midst.
This sentence is sort of confusing. Ukyo exploded? Akane exploded?
I don't remember either of them swallowing anything combustible.
Oops! I wonder how that line was cut. It was to originally read
"...blocked an overhead smash by Shampoo's bonbori, that a flour bomb..."
A short time later, after everyone's wrists had been untied, Kenji
Kuonji introduced himself, and asking after his daughter's health.
They
^asked
Which do you think is better, changing that tense, or removing the 'and'?
him in the conversation. He took an exaggerated glance around the
room,
^an
exaggerated glance? A glance is something fast...perhaps he looked at
everyone's face in turn, or something like that.
I was thinking of him trying to make it obvious that he was looking
around, like one would do on stage. I guess that wasn't clear.
Won't you continue it, please?? (Best wide-eyed cabbit begging
impression)
Well, I wasn't planning to...what?...stop looking at me like
that!...please?
Actually, I'll have to see. I have a loose sort of timeline set, but
nothing specific, and I don't even really know where I want to end up. My
gut reaction is to have it end up where they're not blood related at all,
but I refuse to go down that road, as it's a cheap copout, and ends any
generated conflict prematurely.
potential venue for conflict. Well, making her slightly gone mad
does
that too, but still...
Oh yes, Ranma can now call her "my crazy cousin," rather than "my cute
fiancee". That's going to go over REALLY well with Ukyo.
That's brilliant! Ranma can refer to her like that, and be completely
oblivious to her reaction. And maybe some other people can interject some
phrases during conversation, unwittingly. "That's crazy!" "You'd have to
be nuts to do that!" etc...
-Natsume Ranma Ranma
-------
The sardines weren't worth the trouble. A few more shots, then
Ryoga-san would overheat and explode. Ducking around a corner,
I managed to lose him as I entered the ramshackle residence of
my Anime supplier.
One look at his face and I knew that I had been betrayed. "Tell me,"
I insisted. He refused, so I slammed him against the wall.
"Last chance. Where can Ranma-Ranma find good fanfics?"
"Try Jason Liao," he whispered, before he slumped to the floor.
I heard the sounds of a door splintering as I left through the
window, one step ahead of Tendo Heavy Industries...