Subject: [FFML] [C&C] The Synopsis List Review for March 31
From: "Elsa Bibat" <aerolbj@i-next.net>
Date: 4/9/2000, 11:37 AM
To:


Hiya kiddies !!! Welcome to another installment of the SLR !

Anyway, another large synopsis list it seems. 

BTW, the Elsa Bibat special of the year: A Long Strange Walk 
Y2k is starting to be prepped up and it's already a doozy. That 
also means that the FFML AE will be starting to receive 
nominations again, but that's not for some while yet, but I'm 
already asking you to check the site out and look for people who 
you think should be included in it. 

Thanks !

Disclaimer: 

All opinions are mine. No consultation with the evil
forces that conspire to rule the world was neccessary.

So any comments, to me.


Elsa Bibat is: the Synopsis List Reviewer

                   The FFML Synopses List
                   ======================

For the week of:  March 31, 2000
Moderator on Duty:  Nikholas "Switch" F. Toledo
Synopses Submitted:  34 (with 1 for April 1)

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[All-Purpose Cultural Cat-Girl Nuku-nuku / Bubblegum Crisis]

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Title:  P&B
Segment:  part one.
Genre:  fusion
Author:  Kichigai
Email:  kichigai@ipa.net
Homepage:  http://lavender.fortunecity.com/clockwork/416/index.html

Date Sent to FFML:  March 30, 2000
Archive Number:  8640 (+ 20K)
Size:  62 KB

Series Summary:

Ryunosuke was the one to be killed when running from his mom's
henchwomen.  To save his life, his brain was transplanted into a female
android body.  Now, years later and now male, he is the leader of a
small group of people trying to get revenge on Mishima Heavy Industries.

Segment Summary:

Ryunosuke remembers all the trouble he got into when he first became a
cyborg.  Ryunosuke is shot down in his attempt to get Priss in bed.

Review:

First thing I noticed was the formatting. It's really distracting, and IMHO, 
is really irritating. Try to fix that. A clean work gets more readers, IMHO.
Second, a few typos and awkward sentences for example:

Kyusaku looked at the book and groaned inwardly.
Indeed, she looked like she had just drank something very bitter.  


I mean, I don't get it. Is the she referring to Kyusaku or Mrs. Tanaka ?
Try to go over your work and reread it. Fix it up problems like this. I saw
quite a few of them.

Well, as for the story, it's interesting. Though I'm confused. Is this a fusion
or a crossover ? Priss shows up, but all the other Knight Sabers don't. 
MHI plays the part of Genom it seems and Ryuunosuke and friend are 
the Knight Sabers. And I'm confused. You should have used a proper label
on the header for that one. 

Anyway, other than that, this is pretty good. And it has potential. Hope 
to see more. With proper formatting, of course.

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[El-Hazard]

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Title:  Spirit Within 2: The Sixth Night, The World of Gleaming Light.
Genre:  Action/comedy
Author:  Carrotglace
Email:  Carrotglace@juno.com
Homepage:  http://www.geocities.com/misatira

Date Sent to FFML:  March 30, 2000
Archive Number:  8543 (+ 20K)
Size:  42 KB

Summary:

The completed second chapter to the Spirit Within series.
This time it takes place in El-Hazard, once again sending the world into
a new level of hell.

Review:

Pretty nice description. Especially like the new level of hel part. ^_^
Anyway, another Sean D'anna work that I like, though once again 
Sean pushes my buttons by using formatting that really makes the
fic a bit of a trial to read. At least, he balances it with all that great 
SI action ! Go, Sean, Go ! ^_^

Anyway, keep up the good work and please format the next time. ^_^ 

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[Kimagure Orange Road]

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Title:  The Rebel Esper
Chapter:  2
Series:  Kimagure Orange Road (NOT Shin KOR, though)
Genre:  *shrug*
Author:  David A. Tatum
Email:  desaix@sysnet.net
Homepage:  http://www.geocities.com/Athens/Acropolis/7872/fanfics.htm
To be archived at above

Date Sent to FFML:  March 19, 2000
Archive Number:  8065 (+ 20K)

Series Summary:

Kyousuke, Madoka, and friends deal with a civil conflict in the Kasuga
Family.

Segment Summary:

Akane appears in the Kasuga home, and gets taken to the hospital with
various injuries.

Review:

Another chapter of a fic that doesn't see that many fics. Which is quite 
disheartening, since I find KOR quite cute. ^_^ Anyway, a great chapter
and David's getting into his stride for this one. 

Anyway, keep up the good work and churn more stuff out !

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[Neon Genesis Evangelion]

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Title:  EVA 2055
Chapter:  Episode 2.0, Exodus 0:2 "Project the Past, onto the Future"
Genre:  Alternate Universe, Cyberpunk, Dark, Drama, Spoiler
Author:  Adrian Forest
Email:  dalziel_86@hotmail.com
Homepage:  http://www.geocities.com/dalziel_86/index2.htm
Archived at above

Date Sent to FFML:  March 28, 2000
Archive Number:  8455 (+ 20K)
Size:  27 KB

Series Summary:

I changed a few events in the movies, then advanced the timeline by 40
years.  This just doesn't do it justice though, so you'll just have to
read it.

Segment Summary:

Here, we introduce some of the secondary characters (Yuko Tegami, Ruri
Matsushira, Rumiko Hoshino, etc.), you'll get a bit more on exactly how
the most important secondary character, Asuka, comes to be here, and a
nice creepy bit with some photos happens.

Review:

Pretty weird, though I love the feel. It carries quite a punch: the descriptions
are quite verbose, and pretty damn good pacing. Conversations and dialogue,
however, lack that undefinable it that makes them click for me. Anyway, the 
author'll probably get better with time. 

Anyway, can't wait to see more ! 
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Title:  Gendo, You Bastard!
Genre:  Satire
Author:  Kagami
Email:  kagami@jeack.com.au
Homepage:  http://www.csus.edu/indiv/s/seifertv/kagami/

Date Sent to FFML:  March 25, 2000
Size:  5 KB

Summary:

A series of short e-mails to Gendo and his replies.

Review:
Weird. That's all I'll ever say. ^_^

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Title:  I am Myself
Genre:  unknown
Author:  Chris Burke
Email:  wyrm@engin.umich.edu
Homepage:  http://www.umich.edu/~wyrm/abp/fanfic.html

Date Sent to FFML:  March 25, 2000
Size:  16 KB

Summary:

A day in the life of Ayanami Rei, but something is very wrong.

Review:
This is Ayanami Rei. This is Ayanami Rei on drugs. 

This is my brain. This is my brain after reading the fic. <SSRRRRSSSHH>

Loved the fic ! Nice concept and pretty good way to set it up. I 
would love to see a full version of this, where the entire season
has that wonderful nymphomaniac Rei running around. ^_^

Anyway, keep up the good work.
  
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Title:  Neon Apocalypse Luciferion
Segment:  Part 1 (revision)
Genre:  Action, Action, Alternate Universe, Science Fiction
Author:  David Johnston
Email:  rgorman@telusplanet.net

Date Sent to FFML:  March 31, 2000
Archive Number:  8607 (+ 20K)
Size:  12 KB

Series Summary:

In World War II, an alternate Shinji Ikari finds himself thrust into
piloting a living weapon named Luciferion.

Segment Summary:

Shinji meets Misato Katsuragi.  Great efforts are made to kill both of
them.  Much snappy banter ensues.

Review:
As I read this, I had the same reaction when I played karaoke and the 
background visuals for the song was a soft-porn 

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Title:  Neon Sign Evangelion 2
Genre:  Silly/Bizarre
Author:  A-kun, TharzZzDunN, C-chan
Email:  akun15@hotmail.com, tharzzzdunn1@hotmail.com
Homepage:  http://www.geocities.com/Tokyo/Island/3968/index.html
Archived at http://www.geocities.com/Tokyo/Island/3968/EVA/eva.html

Summary:

More misadventures for the Evangelion Crew.  Sheesh.  You'd think we'd
learn or something. ^_^

Review:

These people should be locked up. And the key thrown away. ^_^
A well-written comedy fic for Evangelion. Is it just me or surrealism
is becoming the trend in fics like this ? 

Anyway, this ahd me in stitches. Keep up the good work !
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Title:  Spirit Within 3
Genre:  Action/Comedy
Author:  Carrotglace
Email:  carrotglace@juno.com
Homepage:  http://www.geocities.com/misatira/

Date sent to FFML:  April 1, 2000
Archive Number:  8668 (+ 20K)
Size:  91 KB

Summary:

Part three of the Spirit Within series, this time it takes place in the
world of Evangelion.

Shinji goes to Nerve after a life lived in a monastery, training, he
pilots Unit One on her maiden voyage and moves in with Misato.  Soon
after, he adjust to school life and faces the second angel as well.  The
real changes haven't started quite yet...

Review:

Weird shit happens once again as Sean goes on his merry way. Though
I wish that Jusenkyo thing didn't come up. I hate Jusenkyo and I'm
sick of stuff like that showing up. -_-;;;;;

Anyway, other than that it's still up to Sean's standards, though the 
character is starting to become more irritating that interesting at times.
But on the whole it didn't suck totally, and I hope Sean gets his stride
back.

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[Neon Genesis Evangelion / Ranma 1/2]

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Title:  Crossed Destinies: Alt. Ver.
Genre:  Fusion
Author:  Nabiki Saotome
Email:  chengdo@home.com

Date Sent to FFML:  March 30, 2000
Archive Number:  8591 (+ 20K)
Size:  19 KB

Summary:

An alternate version of Crossed Destinies.  Ranma 1/2 told with NGE
characters not according to appropriate roles, but according to the
previous fic.

Review:

To be honest, well, I'm not exactly jumping up and down in joy for
the concept. I'm getting tired of Ranma, maybe reading three or four
of them everyday is starting to get to me.

Anyway, its Rokubungi not Rotubungi, BTW. As for the fic, it's got 
a few interesting moments, but I nodded off somewhere in the middle.
Sorry about that, pretty average fic, nothing special.  

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[No Need for Tenchi! (Tenchi Muyo!)]

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Title:  Need For Play!
Series:  Tenchi Muyo! Ryo-Ohki!
Genre:  Humor

Author:  Douglas MacDougall
Archived at http://www.dougmacd.net/fanworks/

Date Sent to FFML:  March 29, 2000
Archive Number:  8559 (+ 20K)
Size:  15 KB

Summary:

How /does/ a super genius relax?

Review:

HAHAHAHAHA !!!! A very amusing short piece, this just kicks.
A short piece with no problems that I can see. Pretty amusing,
just the thing you need for a light pickup. 

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[Oh My Goddess!]

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Title:  What Wish?
Chapter:  Chapter Four
Genre:  Alternate Universe
Author:  TimeRunner
Email:  keiichi@i-manila.com.ph
Homepage:  http://www.geocities.com/Tokyo/Towers/7482

Date Sent to FFML: March 31, 2000
Archive Number:  8638 (+ 20K)
Size:  16 KB

Series Summary:

Keiichi dials up Skuld, a goddess decidedly less inclined to be nice and
friendly toward her client, and discovers he actually isn't sure what to
wish for.

Segment Summary:

Chapter Four: Keiichi deals with friendship, overbearing rich boys, a
campus queen with a conscience, and something he's supposed to know.

Review:

A well-written OMG fic, though the formatting could do a little work. The
concept is just so interesting and the comedy is pure OMG. I loved
it a lot, though I envision problems when the other sisters arrive, especially
Belldandy.  

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[Oh My Goddess! / Buffy the Vampire Slayer]

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Title:  Brimstone Raising
Chapter:  5
Genre:  Crossover [- ed]
Author:  Skyrocket
Email:  skyrocket35@hotmail.com

Date Sent to FFML:  March 26, 2000

Series Summary:

The power of the Hellmouth has drawn Mara to Sunnydale.  When the
goddesses learn of her location it becomes a race against time to stop
Mara from possibly unleashing some great evil into the world.  But all
is not as it seems.  Somewhere in the shadows someone is watching.  And
everything is going as they desire.  Can even the combined might of the
Norns and the Slayer stop Mara from destroying the world?

Segment Summary:

Hot on Mara's trail, Urd, Skuld and Belldandy arrive in Sunnydale.  But
they hardly have time to get their bearing before the city is hit by a
small earthquake.  A quake that, according to Belldandy, was not caused
by nature.  With this omen looming large Urd goes in search of a mystery
man who may have knowledge of Mara's plans.  Meanwhile, Belldandy and
Skuld run into a gang of vampires and a certain vampire Slayer.

Review:

Weird but interesting. I'm starting to see Buffy being the live-action series
of choice for anime crossovers. Anyway as I said pretty interesting. The
dialogue is pretty good and the plot seems plausible enough. But I have
the feeling that the author hasn't hit his/her stride yet and it's a bit ...
slow. 

Well, keep up the good work and polish it up a bit.  

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[Pocket Monsters / Ranma 1/2]

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Title:  Whose Dream is it?
Genre:  Shortfic
Author:  William Morse
Email:  montanto@hotmail.com

Date Sent to FFML:  March 29, 2000
Archive Number:  8527 (+ 20K)
Size:  7 KB

Summary:

When Kasumi sleeps, she dreams of a land where magical creatures live
and she and her friends travel on a continuous journey.  When Kasumi
sleeps, she dreams that she tends the household of a martial arts dojo
where chaos reigns.  This, of course, forces the question: whose dream
is it?

Review:
Another weird shortfic. A bit amusing, though. 

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[Ranma 1/2]

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Genre:  Alternate Universe
Author:  Jason Liao
Email:  jliao@princeton.edu

Date Sent to FFML:  April 1, 2000
Archive Number:  8664 (+ 20K)
Size:  10 KB

Summary:

A tentative intro to a relationship between two characters that has not
been addressed before.

Author's Note:

Post subject header reads "[FFML] [r.5][sF]  I wonder...".

Review:
Another Ranma fic. The concept is a bit boring for me, but I still see
Jason Liao's writing hasn't rusted one bit. Other than that it's Just
Another Ranmafic(TM).

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Title:  An Awakening of Demons
Segment:  9 - Repercussions
Genre:  Action/Thriller
Author:  Kagami
Email:  kagami@jeack.com.au
Homepage:  http://www.csus.edu/indiv/s/seifertv/kagami

Date Sent to FFML:  March 21, 2000
Size:  40 KB

Series Summary:

Ranma Saotome - your friendly neighborhood half-demon?  Kodachi Kuno -
DevilHunter of the Kuno Clan?  Nodoka Saotome - past lover of a Demon
Lord?  Tempted to do a boggle of disbelief?  No need; just read An
Awakening of Demons - where the past is always bad news and history
returns to haunt the living.

Segment Summary:

Akane returns to Nerima subtly changed by Ranma's cure.  The only person
to notice is Cologne who has also arrived back from China with a great
deal of information from the Amazon archives.  The Nerima gang head out
to sea on the back of the Great Devourer, Umibouzu, in search of another
potential ally - only to learn that Shukumaru is not the only enemy
interested in stopping them.

Review:

This is the sort of thing that pumps the life back to Ranma fics for me. 
Action, intrigue and all that. Pretty interesting fic with good writing and 
dialogue backing it up, not to mention the plotting.

A must read for Ranma enthusiasts out there, this will probably become
a classic of the genre. 
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Title:  Childhood of a Modern Dynasty
Segment:  Chapter 31: The High Price of Victory
Genre:  Continuation
Author:  Jim Lazar
Email:  jimlazar@earthlink.net
Homepage:  http://home.earthlink.net/~jimlazar/anime

Date Sent to FFML:  March 27, 2000

Series Summary:


A series chronicling sixty years of Akane Tendo's life.

Some happy moments and some sad.  Akane and Ranma love each other, but
is that enough to keep them together?  Will James Davidson ever finish
the book on Akane's life he is writing?  Not if his fianc�e, Hanaki Ono,
keeps distracting him.

Segment Summary:

Life or death battle against the Buyierfei.  Will Akane and Sanma want
to pay the high price of victory?

Review:

Another of the last remaining enjoyable Ranmafics out there. Probably one
of the best, though the fic vaguely reminds me of Rob Barba's Tales of 
Shampoo. 

Anyway, keep up the good work and keep that action coming ! 

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Title:  Hearts of Ice
Segment:  Part 23: Dragon
Genre:  Mythological Drama
Author:  Krista Perry
Email:  kperry@aros.net
Homepage:  http://www.akane.org
Archived at http://www.akane.org/heartsofice.html

Date Sent to FFML:  March 25, 2000
Size:  97 KB

Series Summary:

A Ranma 1/2 Tale of adventure and romance, myth and magic, love and
revenge.  Yadda yadda yadda. ^_^

Segment Summary:

Kuno and Nabiki take a stroll through the forest.  Ranma and Akane have
a chat with some old guy.

Review:
You know, I'm starting to get really pissed of with Krista about the cliffhanger
thing.^_^ Anyway, the fic keeps up with her exacting standards, and is as
great a read as ever.

Another must read, this is already a classic of fanfiction.

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Title:  I Can See Clearly Now Chapter 4
Genre:  Original Flavor One-Shot
Author:  Miko / M A Davis
Email:  nausicaa@sprynet.com
Homepage:  http://members.xoom.com/bellchan/
Archived at same

Date Sent to FFML:  March 18, 2000
Size:  30 KB

Summary:

With goggles that give him perfect vision and a new attack, Mousse is
ready to Challenge Ranma... but can he actually win?  And will Nabiki
and her partner Wing Ho make a financial killing?  Or will chaos ensue?

Author's Note:

Chapters 1-3 also reposted 3/18/00, originally posted 7/14/98, 7/20/98,
7/24/98.

Review:

Now this is...this is...this is genius ! Damnit boy, this sort of thing is what
I look for in Ranma fanfics. The fic's concept is so...so...I dunno, all that
matters is this fic is great. The writing, the dialogue, the plotting, everything.

A must read for jaded Ranma readers, this will get your blood pumping again.

Oh, BTW, in an earlier chapter...well, I didn't know Ryouga got to meet Ikari
Yui from Evangelion. ^_^

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Title:  Into The Shadows
Segment:  Payment 
Genre:  Alternative
Author:  Kelvin "Lynch" Lee
Email:  lynch@surfshop.net.ph
Homepage:  http://go.to/LeeKing

Date Sent to FFML:  March 30, 2000
Archive Number:  8570 (+ 20K)
Size:  20 KB

Series Summary:

What if Ranma went to the wrong side of the law?  What if Ranma
became... Yakuza?

Segment Summary:

Payment- Ranma is assigned to extract payment from someone who owes his
boss some money.  The thing is, the guy won't pay, so Ranma's going to
have to do something that he won't regret!

Review:

You know, this would have been better if you had just wrote a Crying Freeman fic.

I have to admit it's well-written, very well at that. But the concept is a bit, I dunno...
offputting? Anyway, though the concept is a bit bland, the writing well makes up for
it. This a pretty above-average fic in the writing department, though I can see
a few grammaticals and typos running around. Polish it up a bit.

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Title:  A Magical Solution?
Genre:  Humor
Author:  Douglas MacDougall
Archived at http://www.dougmacd.net/fanworks/

Date Sent to FFML:  March 28, 2000
Archive Number:  8509 (+ 20K)
Size:  8 KB

Summary:

Who says magic can't solve your problems?

Review:

Another weird Ranma fic with an amusing twist. Anyway, a bit enjoyable, at 
least it's short.

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Title:  The Memory of Tears
Genre:  Drama, Fairy tale
Author:  Hayashi
Email:  hayashi@elhazard.net

Date Sent to FFML:  March 30, 2000 (in 2 posts)
Archive Number:  8564 and 8565
Size:  totalling 72 KB

Summary:

At Ranma's birthday party, chaos ensues and words are spoken.  Now the
fianc�es must rescue Ranma, for a switch, but does he really want to be
rescued?

Review:

Pretty good concept and pretty good writing, though the formatting is sucky.
Anyway, a normal above average Ranma fic. Pretty nice though. 

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Title:  The One Who Can Fulfill Your Wishes
Genre:  WAFFy
Author:  Douglas MacDougall
Archived at http://www.dougmacd.net/fanworks/

Date Sent to FFML:  March 31, 2000
Archive Number:  8629 (+ 20K)
Size:  11 KB

Summary:

How powerful would an entity have to be to fulfil /that/ wish?

Review:

Another weird Ranma fic. Don't get me started on it.

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Title:  Shampoo 1/2 Chapter 5: Of Spatulas and Men (prose rewrite)
Genre:  Alternate Universe
Author:  D.B. Sommer
Email:  sommer@3rdm.net
Homepage:  http://angcobra.jumpfun.com/dbsommer.html

Summary:

The last of the prose rewrites of the series.  In this chapter, Ukyou
Kuonji comes to town and tries seeking revenge on Ranma, only a cursed
Shampoo ends up in the fight instead.

Review:

D.B. Sommer's excellent Shampoo 1/2 series is now all-prose with the last
entry of the prose rewrites. This is obviously significantly better than the script
version and I love it twice than when it first came out.

Keep up the good work and Shampoo 1/2 needs another hundred chapters 
or so ! ^_^

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Title:  Wheel of Fire
Segment:  #30: Revelations
Genre:  Continuation
Author:  Razorclaw X
Email:  spiceoflife@hotmail.com
Homepage:  http://www.crosswinds.net/~slythe/ranma/ranff.html

Date Sent to FFML:  March 31, 2000
Archive Number:  8603 (+ 20K)
Size:  61 KB

Series Summary:

What is a wheel of fire but a spinning flame of eternal chaos?  At the
center the flame burns brightest, extending outward to the edges of the
wheel along six spokes, where the flame smolders.  Whether the flame
burns bright or not at all, the wheel continues to spin....

Segment Summary:

Akane is through running!  But, is it wise to face three capable
opponents at once?  Meanwhile, Ranma suffers a flash of nightmares,
prompting him to consult Hokuto for a tarot reading... but what is she
hiding?

Review:

Another chapter of a good popcorn fic, meaning that when I read this I 
usually have popcorn. Mostly because the fic reads like a movie. Anyway
the standards are as always up to the usual, though I'm starting to get 
bored with the fic. The I'm-Jaded-With-Ranma Syndrome is catching up 
and I'll probably be nodding off in a few chapters or so. 

But for what it's worth, this is a pretty good fic.

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[Ranma 1/2 / Samurai X (Ruroni Kenshin)]

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Title:  Ruroni Ranma Part 4: The secret of Jusenkyo.
Genre:  Action-Comedy, fusion
Author:  Carrotglace
Email:  carrotglace@juno.com
Homepage:  http://www.geocities.com/misatira/

Date Sent to FFML:  March 30, 2000
Archive Number:  8648 (+ 20K)
Size:  17 KB

Summary:

Ranma meets Yurika, and his first real opponent to date slowly makes his
way towards Nerima.

Review:

I like most of Sean's works but this...well, it just doesn't turn me on. There
are a few interesting elements, but on the overall I was bored. And the
formatting still sucks.

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[Ranma 1/2 Crossover]

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Title:  Lookalike
Genre:  Humor
Author:  Douglas MacDougall
Archived at http://www.dougmacd.net/fanworks/

Date Sent to FFML:  March 30, 2000
Archive Number:  8588 (+ 20K)
Size:  6 KB

Summary:

My response to _Redheads_, by Robert "Kenko" Haynie, and _Mother?!?_, by
"Kagami".  In both, girl-type Ranma bears a striking resemblance to Lina
Inverse.

Review:

Another short weird Ranma fic. It seems Doug here wants to be the king 
of the Ranma shortfic. Nothing more to say.

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[Ranma 1/2 Mega-Crossover]

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Title:  Muyami Academy
Chapter:  10 - A Day In The Life
Series:  Ranma 1/2, Tenchi, Devil Hunter Yohko, + many others
Genre:  Massive Crossover
Author:  Miko / M A Davis
Email:  nausicaa@sprynet.com
Homepage:  http://members.xoom.com/bellchan/
Archived at same

Date Sent to FFML:  March 19, 2000 (in 2 posts)
Size:  totalling 128 KB

Series Summary:

Ranma Saotome, Akane Tendo, Tenchi Masaki, Ryoko, Yohko Mano, Natsume
(Nuku Nuku) Atsuko, and dozens of others all attend a private academy
owned by Mishima Heavy Industries where the Principal, Gendo Ikari, is
obsessed with demon hunting.  Muyami means reckless or excessive. ^_^;

Segment Summary:

To avoid attending school as a girl, Ranma devises a brilliant plan.
Ranma's roommate Noel Minamino shows up.  Principal Ikari schemes, Nuku
Nuku has fun with Arisa, Yohko looks for a boyfriend in vain, and Urd
has just the thing to cure Ranma's curse.  Just another day for the kids
at Muyami Academy, and hardly any demons this time.

Review:

Not as good as his other fic, but pretty above average, though the fic has 
a distinct Ranma bouquet to it. Anyway as I said, it's pretty good, read it.

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[Ranma 1/2 / 007]

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Title:  Secrets
Segment:  1
Genre:  crossover
Author:  James Lee
Email:  JLee100441@aol.com
Homepage:  http://members.aol.com/JLee100441/page/index.htm

Date Sent to FFML:  March 25, 2000

Series Summary:

Ranma finds out that he is not Genma's son, but the son of a British
agent.

Segment Summary:

Nodoka finds out through her father that Ranma has been kidnapped and
must face up to her past.

Review:
Weird. And it's another crossover with Ranma. Blah blah blah yackety 
schmackety. Anyway, nothing is wrong with the prose it's the concept.
If you want to pull this off, you've got to be a really spectacular writer and
also the fact that this snaps my disbelief suspenders...

Hell, this will probably turn out as a pretty average Ranmafic except for
the gimick.    

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[Sailor Moon / Yoroiden Samurai Troopers]

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Title:  Ronin Summer V : Flashback
Chapter:  Chapter Seven : Complications
Genre:  cross-over
Author:  Morgan Hudson
Email:  dataraven_659@excite.com
Homepage:  http://dataraven_659.tripod.com/roninsummer.html

Date Sent to FFML:  March 30, 2000
Archive Number:  8593 (+ 20K)
Size:  29 KB

Series Summary:

Seiji Date and Minako Aino begin to suffer from constant and mysterious
headaches with a nasty side-effect.  Now, trapped in each other's
bodies, they have to trust Artemis and Luna to psychically set things
straight by reliving their prior lives in the Moon Kingdom.


Segment Summary:

Sage of the Moon Kingdom suffers from the wounds inflicted in his battle
with Kaito Ace's youma, while Sailor Venus does everything in her power
to save him.

Meanwhile, Rowen is having a bit of trouble with his archery, and gets a
lesson or three from Princess Jupiter.  Sage also receives a royally
surprising visitor to his bedside, who for some reason insists she was
never there at all...

Review:

Another marvellous chapter of the Ronin Summer series. A great must
read series now that Mr. Hudson has found his stride. 

Keep up the good work !


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[SailorMoon / The Matrix]

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Title:  Silent Days or why we had the silence.
Genre:  Continuation, Continuation, crossover
Author:  Richard Robinson
Email:  RICHARDROBINSONJR@prodigy.net

Date Sent to FFML:  March 21, 2000
Size:  8 KB

Summary:

What happened to Sailor Moon between the series end and the founding of
Crystal Tokyo.

Review:

Formatting sucks. Other than that a pretty average fic. Sorry for the 
shortness, I'm getting tired after writing a lot.

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[SailorMoon / Mystery Science Theater 3000]

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Title:  Mystery Science Theater 6.7 Episode 26: '9-Ball Dreams'
Genre:  MSTing/Lemon
Author:  Megane 6.7
Email:  fcasper@yesic.com
Homepage:  http://svhp.webjump.com/
Archived at http://www.tass.org/fanfic/MST3k/

Date Sent to FFML:  March 27, 2000 (in 2 posts)
Archive Number:  8432 and 8433
Size:  totalling 113 KB

Summary:

It's crossover time as Joel and the bots are forced to riff a Sailor
Moon Lemon Crossover with 'Color of Money'.  Highlights include Ami and
Tom Cruise boinking on a pool table, token lemon scenes with no
relevance to the plot, the return of the mysterious KEN, and Paul
Newman's in there somewhere, I think.  Meanwhile, outside the theater,
the Satellite of Love faces a serious crisis and only Gypsy can save it
from almost certain destruction.  Intrigued?  Read the MSTing.  Feedback
is very welcome! ;P

Review:

Hilarious MST. Next.

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[SailorMoon / The Terminator]

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Title:  Eclipse of the Moon 2: Purification Day
Segment:  1
Genre:  Satire/Action
Author:  Miashara
Email:  s2mlmill@titan.vcu.edu
Homepage:  http://www.execulink.com/~stryker
Archived at the homepage, eventually...

Date Sent to FFML:  March 26, 2000
Size:  9 KB

Series Summary:

Sailor Scouts vs. Terminator.  A cheesy sequel to the fic the FFIRC said
"Was almost well done."

Segment Summary:

Stuff happens, people run around like morons, and I make lots of bizarre
jokes and comments.

Review:

The mention of this fic actually perked me up a little. This baby's really funny
read it, for the Terry Pratchett-like prose and comedy if anything else.

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[Shadows Without Light - an original work]
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Segment:  Chapter 5
Genre:  Adventure
Author:  Miashara
Email:  s2mlmill@titan.vcu.edu
Homepage:  http://www.execulink.com/~stryker
Archived at the homepage

Date Sent to FFML:  March 27, 2000
Archive Number:  8439 (+ 20K)
Size:  37 KB

Series Summary:

A bunch of not very normal people get thrown into the twilight zone.
The fight against the Dynasty.  The fight to figure out exactly what the
Dynasty is to begin with.

Segment Summary:

Damion's alive.  Everyone's happy about that.  The main characters
finally all sit down and start talking.  Stuff happens.

Review:

Nice. Pretty good dialogue and pretty nice prose, though the formatting
sucks.

Now have to go to sleep.  

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