Dear Mr. Adrian Forest,

I read you request and reply by saying that I can pre-read for you.  I believe I've glanced through the first chapter of your fic before, and have an idea of why you might want to rewrite it or at least improve upon it.

I cannot say that I am an excellent writer, but Mr. E.L. Toh (author of the inspirational "HERZ") has said that I do alright with melodrama and introspection.  I think that the least I can do for you is tell you if something is too fast of not enough, and suggest pathways to a brighter sub-goal.

Also, I can pick out basic and intermediate grammar problems in works that I pre-read, though I can't say I'm as advanced as anyone older than I am (seventeen-years old; i.e. a college student).

Oh, and one last thing: I am a Rei-head, and everytime I think about or discuss Rei, I become more of one.  Beware.  But then, admittedly, the best Evangelion fanfiction has always been a Shinji/Asuka pair up, so if you have a romance element in your fic I can go almost any direction (except with Shinji and Koaru -- I have religious/moral glares at that type of thing).

So before I ramble even more, I'd like to say that I can pre-read, but not co-write, since I'm working on my own piece of Evangelion fiction right now.

Sincerely,
Jon
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