In a message dated 5/29/00 9:00:48 AM, atendido@mindspring.com writes:
Interesting....Ranma becomes a Quantum Leaper.
Ranma stared at the scene before him. Akane lay on the ground, her face
unrecognizable from the damage wrought by the large caliber handgun Kasumi
was holding.
"Well, that's that," Kasumi said cheerfully. She started to put it away
and
then paused, as though something had occured to her. "Oh yes, I almost
forgot. Thank you."
Turning, she fired three quick shots, ending the lives of Tofu, Genma,
and
Soun. "No more blubbering idiots, having to cook enough food to feed an
entire army, or listening to a grown man blubber like a baby." She tucked
the
gun into her apron. "She should thank me." Then she looked down at her
hands.
"Why haven't I-Ah, there we go." For a moment, the air around her was
suffused with red and Ranma could have sworn that he saw a blond haired
woman
superimposed over Kasumi and then she was gone and Kasumi was staring
at the
gun in her apron.
Complete with Evil Leaper and Invisible Holographic Observer?
But of course. . .
"Oh my," she said, astonished. Then, a white haze obscured Ranma's vision
and
he was drifting in a sea of white. He felt strangely unconcerned about
everyth
ing.
Somehow I think even Kasumi's legendary calm would break when
presented with her father, sister, and friend shot to death -- and
herself holding the weapon. A stronger reaction might be called for,
IMHO.
This is Kasumi we're talking about. To me, even if she were to discover
herself face to face with the Olympian Pathenon, I think her first reaction
would be to say "Oh my," and the second would be to offer them some tea. =)
<Ranma. . .> The voice was neither male or female, yet both and somehow
neither.
repetitive -- suggest "The voice was somehow neither male or female,
yet both" or something like that
Well, it is a spamfic, I don't think there's points for grammer. Is there?
"Who?" Ranma asked, looking around.
<I need your help Ranma. My daughter and grandson are about to clash in
Nerima. It must be prevented.>
"Huh?"
What he said. ^_^
Long story.
<Akane died because of my grandson. My daughter is about to try and prevent
it. He must be stopped. For the sake of my own existance, I must act.>
"But what can I do?"
<Your best.> With that, Ranma lost the use of all his senses and then
they were back.
". . .these are my daughters. Kasumi, age nineteen. Nabiki, age seventeen,
and Akane, age sixteen, one of them shall be your bride." Ranma looked
around, trying not be obvious about it. He was kneeling at a table in
a small room that he knew all to well. Next to him, two other girls also
knelt.
Across the table, a redhaired, well built girl was scowling at them as
a large panda stood behind her. It was then he spied a mirror and when he
looked, Akane stared back. For some reason, all he could think of was
two words;
Oh boy. . .
I can think of lots of different problems in store for Ranma as he
tries to play this role...even without swiss-cheesing his memory.
Lots of loose ends here, especially for a spamfic. I'd be really
interested in seeing you expand upon this...
Well if I did, you'd love who his hologram is.
Raja
-Komodo