Man, I agree with Motoko. I was actually beginning to like Mara, and her
parts were fleshed out nicely (pun intended). It was beginning to
sound/look like Mara was finally getting a conscience and it was really
getting interesting dammit :-) .
I do agree that a sequel is in order !!! ;-)))
Just my two cents worth... Anyway Great Story !!!
Cheers,
Saran
-----Original Message-----
From: ffml-bounce@fanfic.com [mailto:ffml-bounce@fanfic.com]On Behalf Of
Motoko Chan
Sent: Monday, June 05, 2000 11:26 AM
To: Bart Kelsey
Cc: ffml@fanfic.com
Subject: [FFML] Re: [Fanfic][OMG] Goddess in the Mirror -- Chapter 5
Its finished! Aww man i was hoping for a longer fic! like some what 10
chapters.
And i was hoping for Mara and Kei to be together[bwahahaha!] but you
guys pulled this... well crap[sorry] of an ending!
It was a good fic with a sound writing skills to back it up but the
ending sucks like a lemon!
I think a sequel is in order! A love triangle between Kei, Mara, and
Bell but you shot that one down with this ending. Thats why i hate it!
Motoko Chan
-Mara! Mara! Mara!
__________________________________________________
Do You Yahoo!?
Yahoo! Photos -- now, 100 FREE prints!
http://photos.yahoo.com
--
.---Anime/Manga Fanfiction Mailing List---.
| Administrators - ffml-admins@fanfic.com |
| Unsubscribing - ffml-request@fanfic.com |
| Put 'unsubscribe' in the subject |
`---http://www.fanfic.com/FFML-FAQ.txt ---'