"Megatokyo eh?" Jones said,
(the commander had forgotten to cut the transmission to his suit so he had heard everything)

"All who hopes that it hits the Genom building says: I "

"I!" the group said as one.

I believe the term is: "AYE!"

The object was now starting to glow red as it entered earth's atmosphere,
keeping its course on Japan and Megatokyo.

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so what do you think about it???
Any asnwers is good.
see you in the next one ^_^

Not bad, but I think it's a little too short to make a decision.  I need to see how the Sabers are holding up first.

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