On Mon, 12 Jun 2000, LaShawn Wanak wrote:
She laid her chin in the palm of her hand and scanned the swirling
maelstrom of
sight and sound with minute precision. Her eyes did not lie. The same fallacy
she had caught earlier was still there.
As in all these chapters--line length problems.
skill will save her butt once Akane catches her in her seat. Ukyo may even be
nice and help Akane kick her out of town. If that stupid girl ever shows up, of
The tense on this particular sentence comes out strangely, in part because
some parts of this paragraph come off as unmarked thoughts.
Had it been her hairstyle or her tomboyish attitude being slandered, Lita
would've waved the insult off (or so she told herself--in reality, the girl
would've been sporting a nice black eye quicker than you can say 'Tyson'), but
the thing that Lita prided herself on more than anything else, even her
fighting
skills, was the fact that she could cook, and not only that, she could cook
*good*.
cook *well*.
That was it. That was what bothered her this morning. There was no way she
would've punched that old guy through the roof if she was back in her own
world.
She just didn't have the strength there. Even if she was in her Jupiter form,
the worst she could do was knock him around a bit before giving him a good
shock
Well, she did pick up an eight foot tall man in metal armor and throw him
over ten feet *before* she ever transformed for the first time. Although
a blow on the scale of 'into orbit' would be beyond her normal limits.
John Biles
Emperor of all He Surveys
http://www.tass.org/~rhea/falcon.html
"Snap out of it, Misty. Only one of us can hallucinate at a time."
"Don't worry, Brock. There's lots of other girls who can reject you too."
--Ash Ketchum, Pokemon