Subject: [FFML] [Original] Thomas Paine
From: Bikisama@aol.com
Date: 6/17/2000, 5:51 PM
To: ffml@fanfic.com


 


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Thomas Paine
By Ranko Saotome

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DISCLAIMER: This is in no way supposed to be taken seriously!

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Macho McHero dashed through the alleyways, seeking the Enemy.

He was a manly man, all bulging muscles and ripped fatigues, 
carrying a ludicrous number of weapons. In his hands was his 
personal favorite, his BFG (Big F****** Gun). He loved the way it 
made his opponents go squish.

He dashed around the corner and saw THEM!!

Hundreds of giant mutant radishes! All fangs and ichor-dripping 
claws!

"DIE YOU M-F VEGETABLES!!" he cried out. "YAAAAHHHH!!!"

Seconds later, all the radishes were pureed.

Macho hefted his BFG and �

"HOLD IT!!"

Macho stopped abruptly at the sound of the high-pitched voice. 
Looking down, he noticed a young girl, about 10 years old.

"What are you doing here? This place is dangerous! There's giant 
mutant radishes and booby-traps and lots of bad language!"

The girl took out a rolled-up newspaper and swatted him in the 
head.

"OW!" the burly action hero cried. "That hurt!"

"Where's the plot?" she demanded.

He looked confused. "What plot? You mean the plot by the giant 
mutant radishes to take over the world?"

She swatted him again.

"STOP THAT!" he demanded.

"No," she said. "Drooling fanboys keep writing fanfics about you 
blow-em-up video-game characters, and I just wanted to know if 
there was any actual plot around here to base a story on."

Macho scratched his head, producing a faint echo. "Well, there's 
the plot about the noble hero overcoming incredible odds with 
nothing more than his trusty BFG and whatever he happens to 
find."

The girl made a rude, crude, and most unladylike sound. "Do you 
have any idea how ludicrous that sounds?"

"It's not ledi- er, luddy � uh, what-you-said!" he protested. 
"See? Here's the BFG! And I'm overcoming incredible odds!"

A giant mutant radish wandered by. Macho McHero raised his BFG, 
but the little girl stopped him. 

The radish dashed toward them, and she stepped out of the way. It 
bounced off a few walls and ambled about randomly, then headed 
toward her again. She stepped out of the way and it wandered off.

"Is that a sample of the 'incredible odds' you're overcoming?" 
she asked snidely. "They're cannon-fodder! They just blunder at 
random! How is blowing them into baby food 'overcoming incredible 
odds'?"

"Uh�"

"And isn't that BFG just a penis symbol for teenaged boys who 
feel underendowed?"

"SHUT UP!" he yelled defensively. "Who the bleep do you think you 
are?!?"

"Me?" she said, all kawaii. "My name's Common Sense. I don't show 
up a lot around here, because I generally feel unwelcome. But 
sometimes I just have to say something."



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