William Morse wrote:
The Masks We Don't Really Have to Wear
An Ranma 1/2/Avengers (the superhero group) fusion
Great to see this one back in action. THis chapter was really awsome when
it first came out. Unfortunatly I didn't get around to responding to this
the first time my apologies. So here It i
Cool. It's never too late for C+C :)
shield to block most of the thrown of water, and that led to Nabiki
eventually asking what the item he had under wraps was. Now that had been
temporarily taken care of, although somehow he had a feeling she wasn't
going to buy the 'lucky hubcap' story he had made up on the spur of the
moment
Personally I'm not sure how long you're going to be able to milk this gag
let's face it even in this enhanced form Ranma just isnt that smart
Nope. Super Soldier Serum only maximizes physical attributes. Mentally
you're on your own.
and
considering how after Ryouga he's Murphy's favorite toy. . . .>
You shall see in upcoming chapters.
quickly. The sooner the matter was settled, the sooner Akane's older
sister
could accept her fate and get on with her life. Perhaps there was
something
Akane could do to draw the two of them closer together. Some common
ground
that they shared. It only took her a moment to come up with something.
The tete a tete you have going with the sisters regarding who gets shafted
with Ranma promises to have lots of milage keep it up.
Thanks. I'll try. Keeps things more up in the air as to who may get who as
well.
"Depends on how much he pays me," Nabiki answered. "I don't fight for
free."
"Pay?!" Ranma snorted in both disbelief and disgust. "I don't think so. I
get into plenty enough fights without having to pay for them."
"And how often do you win?" Nabiki asked.
One request I have for what good it does I know she can be more then a
little more then a pain. I know that she's not the closet saint that a lot
of our colleuges like to write her as but please, PLEASE do not make
Nabiki
one of the villains let's face it she's way too cool for that. OK perhaps
that was a tad knee jerk of me but it had to be said.
Nah. Her being a villain was never a consideration. She's neither that bad
nor that powerful.
Nabiki fished a handful of yen out of the first gang member's wallet,
then
moved on to the next, tossing the worn piece of leather on his chest. "Of
course I can. Think of it as an object lesson for them. Since they're
suffering the anguish of being robbed, maybe that'll make them think
twice
before trying to rob someone else again."
Very nice. Despite my previous rant. Our girl is far from perfect but
still
stylish.
Yep. She's mostly out for herself. In a lot of ways, she's not all that
different from RealNabiki.
"You may call me Xellos, if you must use a name. Just Xellos." The man
bowed formerly, and for just a second, they thought they saw his eyes
Gee I don't know. I'm not sure having more x-overs besides your fusion
really works here. (not that I'm one to talk here) When I read your first
draft I assumed it was Loki.
Any appearances by characters outside of the Ranma 1/2 continuity are
almost always going to be fused with a Marvel hero, villain, or background
character. All will be made clear next chapter.
Kodachi let out a gentle sigh. It was as she feared. "So it is a hostile
takeover."
Misuharu nodded. "Very hostile." His hand went into his pocket, and he
pulled out a gun. He aimed it directly at Kodachi.
Interesting sub plot.
Yep. More on this later as Kodachi becomes a more permeneant fixture in
Ranma's life.
the rain. It washes you free of your cares and leaves you fresh and
rejuvenated." She spun gleefully around in a circle, her bad leg not
hindering her in the least.
THis is a very nice touch showing how the two personalities are merging a
tad more then Akane would care to admit.
Yep. More on this too.
No. That wouldn't do either. It looked like she was going to have to use
that ridiculous name. "I'm Bucky," she sighed in semi-embarrassment.
"Lousy name. What did you do, lose a bet?"
Heh. Best running gag in the entire series.
Thanks. Although there's going to be one other that'll pop up that will be
good too, I hope.
Hawkeye suddenly felt very scared as Raiden, the Japanese God of Thunder,
prepared himself for a battle of the gods.
or perhaps Susano-o would work even better.
Nah. This calls for a Mortal Kombat design character if ever I saw it. :)
It's great to see the best Magna/marvel fusion/xover back in action. I
wish
that was more of a complement but still. Can't wait for chap 5 talk to you
later
Hope to have it out by the end of the week. One advantage is these chapters
haven't been too long so far, so they tend to get done quicker. We'll see.
D.B. Sommer