Normally don't like sending out teasers, but since this
is an orig fic, no one will read it anyway so I guess that
doesn't matter. If you took a great risk and decided to
give it a try, please tell me what you think. :)
Hey, Mikey, I think they like it... :)
Note: This is a lime, though this story is as much about sex as
Ranma 1/2 is about Chinese curses. :)
*blink blink* And you classify it as lime? Wieeeerrrdd...
***
"Hi, there! I'm here to kill you!"
Now THAT's gotta be one of the worst ways to meet a new person... :)
Those were the cheerfully spoken words that roused Ken
Iwakami out of a pleasant nap. "Wha?" he slurred as he scratched
his head in confusion, sitting up in bed and tossing a heavy
calculus text to the floor. He had dozed off studying for a college
mid-term and was apparently having some sort of strange dream.
A girl about eighteen stood at the foot of his bed, smiling at
Ack. Methinks you have some formatting issues. Need a paragraph indent
in front of 'A girl'.
The outfit she was wearing was something out a hentai
magazine or one of his more racier fantasies. Black leather clung
You don't need 'more' in there. Just 'racier' will do. :)
"Yes, I've finally been allowed to select a victim so I can
devour his soul to keep me whole and healthy for the next
thousand years! Out of all the humans in Japan, I've chosen you!
Don't you feel special?"
Oh, well, that's all right then.
*blink blink*
WAITAMINUTE!
Ken thought this had to be the strangest dream yet, even
counting the one where the cheerleaders from high school all threw
lobsters at him. He decided that there was nothing he could do but
O_o I don't wanna know...
Ken thought that this whole thing would be better to take if
she didn't have to be so... cheerful over his impending death, at her
hands no less.
Heh.
"So I'll go to heaven after this and lead an ideal life for all
eternity, right?" Ken asked, trying to recall what little he knew
about the major religions. They all seemed to offer some sort of
paradise after death.
"Nope! When I consume your soul, your very existence
will be destroyed! You will be gone forever!"
"Forever?" he repeated, having slowly made his way to the
edge of the bed, nearly slipping off. He wondered how effective
running like hell would be from a demon-girl. He was starting to
get the feeling that this was no dream.
Not too quick on the uptake, is he? :)
The girl nodded with a grin as she sat cross-legged on his
pillow.
... which promptly caused Ken to develop a high-pressure nosebleed and
pass out.
"Why do they always do that?" exclaimed the demon-girl.
:)
"Wait, you're a succubus, right? Aren't you supposed to
seduce men into your trap and suck out their souls before they
know what happened?"
The girl laughed. "Succubi are just the inventions of ecchi
old men! They don't really exist! Well, there are the angels of
desire..."
"But you look like..."
She blinked and glanced at herself, squirming all around as
if in search of some imperfection. "What do you mean? All
demons look like this... well, more or less."
That's a scary thought.
Ken decided that he'd be a coward not to at least try to
escape. After all, what could be worse than his impending doom?
So while the demon-girl was busy examining herself, he dashed for
the door. Or at least tried to anyway. After only a few feet, an
invisible force seemed to seize him at the neck, knocking him to
the floor. Ken looked down to see that he was now wearing a
studded leather collar. A long silver chain lead off from it, the
other end firmly in the girl's hand.
KEN: Ooooh, bondage!
"It's okay," she whispered. "The process is completely
painless. You won't feel a thing. Some demons don't tell their
victims, but don't really think that its fair to them. But look on the
bright side, at least this way to can't go to hell!"
Oh, yeah. REAL good bright side, there. *shakes head* Gaaah.
Y'know, for a demon-chick, this girl seems awfully nice...
"But I can't die yet!" Ken protested, feeling almost frantic
for some way to save his life. Pathetic it might have been, but it
was the only one he had. "I'm still a virgin!"
*slap* D'oh!
DEMON-GIRL: ... and this is a problem *how*, exactly?
The demon-girl blinked, looking at him closely for a few
moments before finally shrugging her shoulders and saying. "Oh,
all right. If that's what you want..." The stood and proceeded to
slip off her long leather gloves, dropping them to the floor.
For a moment Ken wondered what she was doing, but then
his eyes went wide as the realization hit him. "Actually, I meant
with a human girl...," he told her, but she didn't seem to hear him
as she bent down to remove her boots. People under great stress
tend to notice the most irrelevant things. Ken noticed that she had
surprisingly cute toes for a demon-girl.
Um... I'm officially scared, now... :)
She stood, looking down at him in only her one-piece
bikini, her large wings having vanished, though the little ones on
her head swayed in some unfelt breeze. "You better get ready
yourself. The sooner this is over with, the sooner you won't have
to worry about dying!"
*That's because you'll be munching on my soul by then,*
Hah!
Ken thought with a frown, but instead said, "But I thought you said
you weren't a succubus..."
The demon-girl rolled her eyes. "I'm not, silly, but we were
all made in the image of the same Creator, so we all have the same
basic parts. Mine just work a little differently from yours, that's
all."
Ah... um...
Er...
Yikes?
And with that, she finally slipped off her bikini, standing
totally nude before him. Other than being unusually pale, her body
looked like that of a normal human female. Actually, normal
didn't fit at all; it seemed the living image of the work of a great
sculptor. Her body was flawless; from the tip of her slightly
pointed nose, down her shoulders to her full breasts, down further
her flat stomach, curvy thighs, to her cute little toes.
"Well?" she asked, putting a hand on naked hip. "All you
want to do is look?"
KEN: Well, yeah. What, you mean there's more?
Ken shut his jaw, which felt like it had been hanging open
for the past several minutes, and slowly stood up to face her,
finding that he was just a bit taller, so he had to look down into her
red eyes, eyes that twinkled with amusement. *This isn't the way I
wanted my first time to be, but since it looks like it'll be my _only_
time, I better just go for it.*
Great attitude. Yeeap. :)
Very slowly and cautiously, as he expected her to attack
him any moment, he wrapped his arms around her, finding her skin
hot like she had a fever. Shivering with contact, he drew her closer
KEN'S BRAIN: Wait, we can't do this. She's from hell.
KEN'S HORMONES: Yeah. So?
KEN'S BRAIN: Hell. *Hell*. You know, the really REALLY warm place with
the pitchfork-waving demon-types?
KEN'S HORMONES: (distractedly) Uh-huh. So what's your point?
KEN'S BRAIN: Look you... it's just not right, okay? She's from hell,
we're supposed to dislike hell, and here you are -
KEN'S HORMONES: (exasperated) Look, can you shut up for a few? I'm
kinda busy here... *mmph*
to him, drawing those dark lips in for a kiss.
In a blur of motion, she had picked him up and slammed
him down on his bed, shredding his clothes from his body with a
loud tearing sound, all without breaking off the kiss. Instead, she
deepened it, slipping in her tongue between his surprised lips.
*She's got a forked tongue,* he thought before shrugging mentally
and trying to kiss her back with the same force.
I don't know if that sounds interesting, or frightening...
Ken swept back her long blue hair, feeling like strands of
the finest silk, to uncover her pointed ear, in which he whispered
all the things he had planned to say at this moment, all at once so it
came out as gibberish, causing the demon-girl to giggle girlishly.
*slap* D'oh! REAAAAAL smooth, Romeo.
It was the aftermath of their second orgasm. Ken lay staring
up at the ceiling, the demon-girl cuddling at his side. He could
almost pretend she was a real girl with only the top of her head
protruding from the blankets, if he could ignore those little bat
wings. *They're kinda cute though.*
Ah... riiiiiggghhtt...
O_o
Very nice. VERY nice. I'm definitely looking forward to more. The big
issue that I see is, you've got to do some formatting - I was having a hard
time telling where paragraphs began and ended.
Other than that, though, it was splendid. Thanks!
Brian Payne
sofaspud@sofaspud.org
http://www.sofaspud.org