This was a bit of a departure for me, but owes to a few different authors,
most notably Scott Jamison again, for 'Those Who Can't'. >I'm a little
afraid that Ranma's 'training' is too subtle, not only for >Akane, but
also for the reader. Tell me what you think!
C.
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I liked this a lot. The only complaint I would have about it is despite
fanfic cliche's the one time Ukyou went all out against Akane, in the
Moxibustion story line, Akane had no trouble avoiding the spatula and
Kodachi has
*never* beaten Akane despite her frequent attacks using kendo
swords and mallets. But thats just me nit picking keep up the good work.
Bill Morse
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