Title: ASHES - A Cinderella Story Chapter Three: Drawing Closer,
Getting Near
Elsa,
Apologies for the late reply.
A really funny story with only one fault. It's too short! ^_^
I plan on about nine chapters, so maybe I can stretch it out a
little. There's an awful lot supposed to happen to my
unsuspecting hero(ine).
The Hiroshi POV
shifting to third person POV can be confusing at times but the
story is told much better this way than a normal stright POV.
I wanted to do EVERYBODY in first person, but after a brief
struggle between lunacy and good taste, common sense prevailed
and that POV was reserved for Hiroshi. Still working on
transitions for the POV changes to lessen confusion.
And, damn, is it good.
A must read and a gem of a Ranma story.
Thanks for the warm glow,
James
James and the Bluejay
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