When you have an opinion that makes
sense, maybe I'll listen. Until then, I'm going to help Akane achieve her potential. She is my
friend after all."
Genma have some sensible ideas, let alone opinions. I can picture
pigs flying, with wings and a halo and a clear blue piece of the
sky falling on my garage, as being far more likely to happen.
Genma, for his part, mused over the fact that his plans to convince Ranma to choose one
of the Tendo daughters by the end of the day conveniently had the added benefit of being a
suitable revenge for a disrespectful son as well...
You know I saw an animated J-peg or jpg the other day, a bouncing
baby. Too bad no one has done a picture of Ranma dribbling a
panda. After reading this I thought sure that was going to
happen. Let no one say it wouldn't be just and merciful either.
I liked the school session but it could be improved with more
detail. As a friend of mine lectures me about often enough, show
don't tell. Give the details and make us feel like we were there
watching. Even if it's only flashes of scenes, details are very
important to the feel of a story.
As before I don't care if you reply to this publicly or
privately.
--
Rick Robinson
RICHARDROBINSONJR@yahoo.com
Why shouldn't truth be stranger than fiction? Fiction, after all,
has to make sense.
Mark Twain (1835-1910)
"If toast always lands butter-side down and cats always land on
their feet, what
will happen if you strap toast to the back of a cat and drop it?"
Monday is an awful way to spend 1/7th of your life.
--Steven Wright