I have to agree with Jamie, Speed.. it's
an interesting story, but very hard on the eyes.

    You need to indent and double space between
paragraphs. Just like this letter I'm writing to
you. Note the blank line between each paragraph.
Notice the indent setting off the beginning of
the paragraphs.

    Try it. You might get more readers that
way.

    Ed Becerra


    "Dreamers may die, but the Dream is eternal..."