Hi, Latin D!
Yes, it's been a long while since I've sent anything. No, I wasn't dead.
It's mid-terms, okay? But I'm not about to let a chapter by my good friend
Latin D go by without a comment or two from me, no sir! ^_^
Okay, first of all, I'd love to do a line-by-line on this, but I can't. I
can't for two simple reasons. First of all, I'm trapped in the middle of
mid-terms, and it would probably take me more than a week to finish. I
thought you might prefer something a bit more timely. ^_^
Second -and I mean this- I'm speechless. I had a few problems with the
original version of this chapter (namely the no-Rick thing, and the ease
with which Ranma got shovelled into the RDF), but those were all taken care
of quite nicely this time around. I think the aspect of Ranma-as-trainer is
brilliant, and allows for a slower introduction to the RDF. It's also lovely
to see Rick getting some screen time, after all that while he spent trapped
in the bowels of the SDF-1. The bathtub scene was wonderful - it seems Ranma
wound up picking up more from Soun and Genma than just martial arts, ne?
Next thing you know, he'll start playing shogi with Max all day. ^_^
No grammar or spelling errors that I was able to notice, and I pretty much
used up most of my bad jokes for this one on the original copy. ^_^
Wish I had the time to give you more detail, pal: maybe next time, huh? I
swear, chapter 7 gets the full Hudson treatment! Whether that's good or bad
is up to your opinion, I guess. ^_~
Anyway, I just wanted to congratulate you on a job incredibly done. Now get
to work on your next chapter, already! ^_^
Farewell until next time, pal!
-Morgan Hudson
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