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And yet another one that has been laying around:
[As Nanami speaks, the tiny bits of the screen not covered by the spinning
rose change colour. We're probably missing some lovely scenery.]
--Alan Harnum and Paul Corrigan, "Sovereignty-Associationist Girl Nanami,"
2000
Heh. That was a good one
On the other hand, I do remember brother shooing me away in favor of a
cat, and how it upset me. More than mother dying, I suspect. But when
mother
died I was too young to realise what had happened, I suppose.
The things one should remember, one doesn't. On the other hand, one
remembers the silliest things. One's head never gets its priorities
straight.
True. Very true
I'm fairly sure I can date my penchant for yellow roses and yellow in
particular to that day.
Very nice way of providing backstory to that. Simple, yet Very touching.
Nice way to write from Nanami's POV as well.
Enough to turn the head of brother. The only one to match him, really.
Maybe he looks at her and not me because I don't even come close.
Maybe he thinks I'm just a normal girl, and she's what girls should be.
Mind you, I don't think I was much of a voice for the people on Student
Council either.
Utena Tenjo's very easy to admire. But I still don't like Utena Tenjo
very much.
Heh. Nice. I like that.
Excellent little piece. No grammar errors that I could find and the prose
allowed it to flow. Doing it from Nanami's perspective helped.
D.B. Sommer