Subject: [FFML] Re: [Eva/HPL] Children of an Elder God 18
From: Tempest-
Date: 12/1/2000, 8:38 AM
To: ffml@fanfic.com

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Meanwhile, in Gendo's office, a meeting between the

Commander and his Sub-Commander was taking place, though

the topic and the atmosphere was quite different than past

meetings.  Fuyutsuki was standing before Gendo's desk,

glaring down at his superior with unmasked anger.



Gendo wilted under Fuyutsuki's gaze.  "I didn't know

she had been..."



"All of our plans nearly came to naught because you

couldn't keep your pants shut.  No, you just HAD to use the

poor girl as your sex toy!"



*shutter*



I'm simply in awe at how well pre-plotted this fanfic was.  I've been

reading some of the first few chapters to so of jog my memory of sorts and I

noticed that you guys have been hinting as to Gendo's illicit activities as

early as Chapter 4(!!).  That's an incredibly long time to wait for a

payoff, 14 chapters later.  I'm officially impressed.



    BTW, fantastic job with this chapter.



Adam C. Leigh

Tempest@mail.com







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