Subject: [FFML] [fic outline] A Far Off Place....
From: WINGHigley@aol.com
Date: 12/13/2000, 11:42 PM
To: ffml@fanfic.com
CC: cactusnick@yahoo.com

Here's the potential outline for the fic I'm going to begin after finishing 

"U-Jin's Ranma Diaries" (the final chapter, of which, should appear in about 

two weeks)  and will alternate with between "Melted Hearts."  I'm going to 

try to avoid massive OOC here, so any C&C about this outline and how the 

characters react would be appreciated:





Prolouge:  Six months have passed since Vol. 38 of the manga.  The 

relationship between Ranma and Akane (as well as between Ranma and Nabiki) 

has deteriorated since the failed wedding.  Akane is furious that Ranma still 

hasn't admitted his love for her, while Ranma, having come so close to 

marriage, has started to question whether or not living a quite life with 

Akane at the Dojo is really what he wants.  Ranma's whole life has been full 

of adventure and he's not sure that raising a family with any of the girls he 

knows is what he really wants. (He also doesen't want to become Shampoo's sex 

slave.)  



Ukyo, meanwhile, has started to grow frustrated with Ranma's seeming lack of 

interest.  She's even started to notice that Konatsu fawns over her, making 

her realize that there are more fish in the sea than Ranma.  



Ryoga has been selected to participate in a trial program for a new drug that 

partially cures his lack of direction.  Ryoga decides to fully commit to 

Akari, and move in with her.



Chapter 1:  Ranma, Akane, Akari and Ukyo head to Furinkan High where they are 

all shocked to learn that their test scores are high enough to get into 

Sapporo University.  SU is a prestigious liberal arts college that offers 

degrees in Drama and Communications.  (Note:  I have no idea if there really 

is a Sapporo U, and if so, what degrees they offer.)



Akane goes to enter the Drama program, while Ranma is forced by Genma and 

Soun to accompany his fiancee.  SU offers a degree in Phys Ed., so Ranma 

takes that.



Ukyo, who's doubts about Ranma are still in their formulaic stage, decides to 

go to SU in a last-ditch attempt to win Ranma.  She doesen't even know what 

degree she wants, she's certain she'll have Ranma falling for her by the time 

she gets her Associates Degree (or the Japanese equivalent of it).



Akari goes to get a Marketing degree so she and Ryoga can open their own Sumo 

Pig Training School.  She and Ryoga decide to get off-campus housing and live 

together.



Shampoo, meanwhile, has run up a considerable debt to Nabiki.  When Shampoo 

proves unable to pay the bill, Nabiki has her, Cologne and Mousse deported 

back to China, effectively removing them from this fic.



Chapter 2:  The Wrecking Crew arrives in Sapporo!  The parents had arranged 

for Ranma and Akane to share a co-ed dorm (do the Japanese even have these?) 

but the two secretly make arrangements to get seperate room-mates.



Akane ends up with Utena Tojou, who is on the rebound from a bitter breakup 

with Anthy.  



Ranma, meanwhile, winds up with a girl named Noriyo.  Noriyo is a wild "goth" 

chick who alternates dying her hair between blue and green.  Noriyo spends 

more time at raver clubs than in class, and thinks that Ranma's curse is the 

coolest thing since Led Zeppelin songs were digitally remastered. (Note:  I 

may end up switching the character to FLCL's Haruko)



Chapter 3:  Ranma and co. settle into day-to-day life at college.  Akane and 

Ranma begin training together. 



Akane and Utena get off to a bad start.  Akane whines and moans about her 

"baka finacee" while Utena spends most of her time depressed over her split 

with Anthy.



Ranma and Noriyo get off to a more bizarre start.  Noriyo is open about her 

sexuality in ways that Shampoo never was.  Ranma often walks in on Noriyo 

having sex with members of both sexes (Noriyo is an open bisexual).



Chapter 4:  The tale shifts to focus on Ryoga and Akari.  Their life is not 

one of domestic bliss that Ryoga pictured.  Now that Ryoga has been partially 

cured of his lack of direction (it comes in flashes, now, at the worst times 

of course) he gets to spend a lot of time with Akari and discovers her to be 

a needy and pushy girl, who has to dominate her "Ryoga-sama."



Ukyo, meanwhile, starts to find herself attracted to one of her teachers, 

30-year old 

Shoji Onita.



Chapter 5:  Homecoming time!  Akane's attempts to get Ranma to ask her to the 

dance backfire, and Akane ends up going alone.  At the dance, she bumps into 

Utena, who jokingly asks her to dance.  The entire school is shocked when 

Akane accepts and dances the night away with the Revolutionary Girl.



Ranma, meanwhile, is set upon spending the night in his dorm room watching 

TV.  Noriyo will have none of that, however, and drags him off on a wild 

night on the town.



Back at the dance, Akari has become obsessed with her and Ryoga winning 

"Homecoming King and Queen."  When they fail, she and Ryoga have a bitter 

argument.



Ukyo has also showed up at the dance alone, convinced that she would be 

leaving with Ranma.  Disappointed when he doesen't show up, she ends up 

spending the night talking with Onita-sensei.



Chapter 6:  The day after.  Akane and Utena have become fast-friends now that 

the ice has been broken between them.



Ranma, meanwhile, wakes up naked, in girl-form, in bed with Noriyo.  

Suffering from a bad hangover, Ranma can't remember anything from the night 

before.  Noriyo is equally tight-lipped, refusing to admit whether or not she 

and Ranma had sex the night before.



When Ranma goes to Ryoga and Akari's apartment to try and talk about it with 

the pig boy, he notices that the relationship between Akari and Ryoga has 

chilled considerably.



Ukyo spends the day thinking about how great Onita-sensei is.



Chapter 7:  We fast-forward to Christmas Eve.  Akane takes Utena with her 

back to Nerima because Utena's Aunt Yurica is out of the country.

 

Ranma decides to take a later flight back to Tokyo, but Sapporo gets caught 

in a bad snow blizzard and Ranma winds up stuck in his dorm with Noriyo.  The 

two end up having dinner at a bad fast-food restaurant, then spend the night 

walking around the campus.  The two let their guards down and Noriyo admits 

that she didn't actually sleep with Ranma that night.  Ranma is relieved and 

confesses that he's grateful for Noriyo opening up his eyes and exposing him 

to the wilder side of college life.  Noriyo admits that she's come to 

appreciate Ranma's friendship.  As the two pause on a bridge to admire the 

city at night, Noriyo says she has a Christmas present for Ranma.  Ranma asks 

what it is and Noriyo responds by kissing him.



Ranma responds to the kiss at first, until Akane's image appears in his mind. 

 Freaking out, Ranma runs off into the night.



Akari shows up at home.  When her grandfather asks where Ryoga is, Akari says 

that Ryoga went to his own home.



Chapter 8:  Three weeks have passed and classes have resumed.  Ranma has not 

been back to his dorm room since that night.  Noriyo is relieved when he 

shows up for one of the classes they share.



When she confronts him back at the dorm, Ranma reacts with hostility towards 

Noriyo.  He accuses her of trying to seduce him that night and of trying to 

trap him into marriage.



Expecting Noriyo to react like Akane usually does and belt him in the face, 

he is horrified when Noriyo breaks down in tears.  Not sure what to do, Ranma 

stands there numbly as Noriyo explains that she would never force Ranma to do 

anything he didn't want to, and that she really does like him.



Touched by this, Ranma forces himself to help Noriyo to her feet and hug her. 

 (This would be a huge, cathartic scene where Ranma's pride and heart wage a 

pitched battle inside of Ranma, with his heart finally winning out and 

pushing him to a new level of maturity).



Meanwhile, it's time for Akane and Utena's day of reckoning.  Akane shows up 

at the dorm complaining of back spasms from training.  Utena gives her a back 

rub, and pushes her luck when she starts fondling Akane's breasts.  Akane 

stiffens at first, but then relaxes, turns around and begins kissing Utena.



Chapter 9:  Ranma and Akane have a meeting, both intent on breaking off the 

engagement with the other.  They are both shocked and relieved when they find 

out the other has taken up with somebody else.  While Akane is amused that 

Ranma has ended up with somebody as completely different as him as Noriyo, 

Ranma is confused and hurt that Akane has decided she is a lesbian.  



Ranma feels depressed and embarrassed, viewing Akane becoming a lesbian as 

the ultimate sign of his lack of manliness.  Noriyo tries her best to comfort 

him, but this is still Ranma we're talking about here, and her efforts fall 

on deaf ears.



Meanwhile, Ukyo volunteers to be Onita-sensei's student-assistant.  Ukyo 

claims it's because she needs the credit, but there is an obvious attraction 

between the two.



Ryoga finally decides to move out of the apartment he shares with Akari.  His 

pain is doubled when he learns of Akane's recent "awakening."  Emotionally 

distraught, he throws away his medication and wanders off into the dark, 

deciding he needs to get lost for a couple of years to forget all the pain 

he's suffered.



Chapter 10:  Ranma starts to get over his depression and sits down with 

Noriyo to define what boundaries their relationship will have.  They both 

agree that their will be no pressure about marriage, and that they won't 

become too serious, too fast.  Noriyo also agrees to not push the idea of sex 

between them, Ranma is still somewhat shy when it comes to that area.  Noriyo 

also agrees, that once they do go to that level, she won't push for sex with 

Ranma's girl-half.  Ranma may or may not do that eventually, but he's still 

years away from accepting the idea of him having sex as a girl.



Just as the two agree on the rules and kiss, a messenger shows up at the door 

with a telegram from Nodoka.  Both the Tendos and Saotomes are coming to 

Sapporo for a week, and the parents are all eager to see how well Ranma and 

Akane are getting along as finacees....





And that's just the tip of the iceberg.  How will a traditional woman like 

Nodoka react to Noriyo?  How will Soun react to Akane as a lesbian?  How will 

the fathers react to both Ranma and Akane refusing to honor the agreement to 

merge the clans?  What happens when Principal Kuno gets appointed School 

Provost?  Will Ukyo allow herself to forget Ranma and fall for an older man?  

How will the school react if the scandal should break out?  Where will Ryoga 

end up?  What about when Shampoo returns and gives Noriyo the Kiss of Death?  

How will Noriyo react when her best friend dies of an Extasy overdose at a 

rave party?  All this and more in the forthcoming "Ranma 1/2:  A Far Off 

Place...."



Coming in 2000 from W*ING Higley.  Any C&C about this outline would be 

appreciated.







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