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Sorry this is so late. I've been working my way

through a tremendous backlog.



I saved this to C&C, but it really doesn't lend itself

to criticism. It's VERY very nice. Funny, well

crafted.

I could probably find a few nit-picks if I tried. But

it's just a really clever story and a nice read.



Thanks for writing it. 







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"When I get a little money, I buy books;

 And, if any is left, I buy food and clothes."-Erasmus



"A man is a small thing, and the night is large 

and full of wonders." -Lord Dunsany



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