Subject: [FFML] [Fanfic][alt][R1/2] Polarity ch01a [DRAFT 2]
From: "Tangent" <tangent@zbzoom.net>
Date: 12/15/2000, 6:57 PM
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  Polarity

     A Ranma � fanfiction by Tangent

     Pre-reading and editing assistance by:

     Fire

     Lord Talon;

     Nevrmore;

     And some guy named Steve



     Originally derived from 'Hated' by Fire, who has graciously

consented to allow me to continue the story in my own manner.

Some minor editing exists, but mostly in format and the 

occasional grammar error. I also corrected what I viewed as 

continuity errors, such as references to Miss Hinako and the 

Contrary Jewel, which didn't occur until much later in cannon 

(manga or anime). Otherwise this first chapter differs only a little 

from the first chapter of 'Hated'.



     DISCLAIMER: 'Ranma �' and all characters therein belong to 

Rumiko Takahashi, Shogagukan, Kitty, and Viz Video. The 

original version of 'Hated' was thought up and written by Fire. 

This fanfic has been produced for my own enjoyment and to pass 

on without profit. Other characters that come into play in this 

fanfic may or may not be pulled from other sources (including 

other fanficts, RPGs, manga, anime, literature, or possibly even 

*GASP* American comic books!).



     A WORD FROM FIRE: This takes place shortly after Ranma 

defeated Happosai with the Hiryuu Shoten Ha. At this point, 

Ryoga is still under the illusion that Ranma forced himself upon 

Akane. Ranma had claimed this to infuriate Ryoga sufficiently that 

he would be able to do the training needed for the Hiryuu Shoten Ha. 

A few days have passed since the battle in the schoolyard. 

Happosai is still really mad about the beating that Ranma gave him, 

and at the loss of his "pretties" which Ranma destroyed in vengeance. 

Meanwhile, no one remembered to clear up the little misunderstanding 

with Ryoga since he wandered off, and always wants to kill Ranma 

anyway...



     CHAPTER ONE:



     "Happosai said you would come here. Four days I have waited. 

Four days just to make sure that you would be brought to justice."

     Ranma grinned at the lost boy. "Well, if you think that you're 

good enough to take me on, let's get to it." He dropped into a battle 

stance and waited for Ryoga to attack. 

     Ryoga just stood there, one hand in his pocket, the other 

brushing some of the windblown hair from his eyes. "Not this time, 

Ranma. This time I really am going to punish you for your crimes. 

Happosai gave me just what I needed too..."

     Ryoga whipped his hand from his pocket, waved a jeweled broach 

at Ranma, and recited the spell that he had memorized over the past 

four days: "For your crimes, I banish and bind you. I send you to a world 

where those who know you detest your presence. I send you to a world 

where your very name is blight. I send you to a world where I do not 

exist so you cannot torture me anymore. Saotome Ranma: be gone!"

     Stunned by what his old rival was saying, Ranma did not try to 

move. When he saw swirls of black coming out of the broach, Ranma 

dodged, moving to the side. For a few moments the blackness got 

larger, only to suddenly vanish before it could do anything to touch 

him. Ranma looked around startled. "Feh! That fool Happosai, always 

messing with things he doesn't know. Now he's gone and disappeared 

Ryoga."

     Ranma headed off to his favorite bridge. He'd had a really big 

argument with Akane today, and did not need any more trouble. 

Looking in to the water, Ranma sighed and wondered what it was 

that he did this time to make the tomboy so angry.



     When the sun started to go down, Ranma figured it would be 

time for some food. Better not go back home yet. Akane said she 

was going to be cooking. Maybe he could sneak in later tonight, 

but doing so now was a bad idea. Figuring the Nekohanten would 

be the best bet, Ranma headed off for his usual haunt. All the way 

there something called at the back of his mind. His senses 

whispering that something was not right. Something was amiss. 

Whatever it was, he could not pin it down, so when he saw the 

cafe he dismissed it. 

     He had just pushed open the door when he heard an anguished 

scream and saw Mousse charging him. Ranma leapt out the still 

open door and faced Mousse. When Mousse ran out the door he 

stumbled to a halt. The fiend Saotome was across the street? How 

did he move so fast? Gripping several shuriken in each hand, Mousse 

began to circle towards his foe. "How dare you come here! Again you 

show your true cowardice. Instead of being in China facing the Council, 

you would harass Shampoo now! I call you a coward and a dog, Saotome!"

     Ranma stumbled to a halt. He still watched Mousse, but something 

in his words caught his attention. Mousse usually hated him for trying to 

take away his beloved Shampoo, but he had never called Ranma a coward 

before. He was just about to retort, something witty and intelligent like '

well, at least I can see, duck boy' when Shampoo came out of the 

restaurant. She could sort this out.

     "Shampoo never be wife to killer like you!" She leveled her bonbori 

at him and spat at his feet. "No care what tricks you try and use, 

Shampoo die before she be Saotome wife!"

     Ranma staggered to a halt. There was something seriously wrong 

here. Why did she suddenly hate him? "Hey, Shampoo, if it's something 

I did, just tell me."

     That only seemed to make them madder. Mousse flicked out his six 

throwing stars and grabbed a pair of daggers. Even though he was looking 

at Shampoo, Ranma caught four of the stars and jumped over the other 

two. He wandered up to her and tried to see if it was the same Shampoo 

he knew. This was made a bit difficult by the fact that she was trying to 

brain him with her weapons. He was beginning to feel fairly sure that it 

was her when he realized it could not be. The Shampoo that he knew 

always went as hard as possible in a fight, she never gave any quarter. 

This girl seemed to be much worse than the one that he was familiar with. 

Not only that, but she was having a hard time moving the bonbori in the 

usual fluid grace that Shampoo had. She made these ones look like they 

were the weighty weapons they should be rather than the light show 

pieces that they never were.

     He was just stepping back from trying to get a good look at her face 

when Mouse threw both daggers at him. Catching them, he did a flip to 

cover the distance between his attackers. Standing nose to nose with 

Mousse, he span a dagger on each index finger. "Come on, Mousse. 

You can do better than that." Indeed, Mousse was much slower than he 

remembered, actually taking the time to prepare his weapons for use, 

rather than pull them out on a whim all ready to use.

     He smiled when Mousse opened his robe and brought out a pair of 

katanas. [Better watch that, he must have something big planned]. 

Mousse began to do an intricate sword kata in front of him, creating a 

wall of steel. If Ranma wanted to attack him, he would be sure to suffer 

a hit. "Hey, Shampoo, does this mean no free Ramen?"

     Shampoo snarled and lunged, trying to pin him between two foes. 

Ranma shot up into the air, over Mousse and landed behind him. With 

a kick to the seat of the pants he pushed the two together, Mousse 

barely managing to spare Shampoo from his blades. "I can see this 

probably is not the best time to talk. I'll drop by later."

     Snarling, the two Chinese watched him jog down the road. "Don't 

worry, Shampoo. When Cologne returns, she'll give us permission to 

hunt him to the ends of the earth. To break a conclave while under 

truce is punishable by death. You'll never have to marry him now."

     Shampoo placed a hand on his shoulder and looked after the 

departing form. "Good. Shampoo always think evil Saotome a tricky 

killer. Never realized he this good. Might be hard to kill in proper combat."

     Mousse laughed at that one. "I don't care how good he his. With 

this many people wanting to kill him, he'll go down quickly enough."

     As he headed back into the cafe, Shampoo snagged his arm. 

"Mousse, how evil Saotome able to leap over you?"



* * *



     Ranma was almost home when it struck him. No damage. That 

was what was wrong. He looked around. Everything was in perfect 

condition. Well, it was as worn as you would expect a city to be, 

but there were no signs of recent repair. No craters in the roads or 

walls. No fist or mallet (or head) marks in the signs and walls. 

     Feeling a little bit more nervous, Ranma took a quick jog to 

school. It was perfect. The walls weren't destroyed. Most of the 

windows looked at least a week old. Some of them were even dirty, 

and he never knew of a window in Furinkan which lasted long enough 

to get dirty. Even those trees which Kuno and Ryoga had chopped 

down while attacking him were there.

     Ranma felt a chill up his spine. What was it Ryoga had said when 

he waved that thing? ' I send you to a world where those who know 

you detest your presence'. If people hated him here, then he could 

have a real problem. In times like this, there was one person who he 

could turn to. One person that would look beyond something as 

superficial as personality or past actions. Someone who did not mind 

what crimes he had committed if he went to her for help. The one 

person who would treat him the same in any world in any situation: 

Nabiki. If he had the yen, she could help.

     It was full dark when he arrived at the Tendo training hall. Well, 

even if Ryoga had sent him away, everyone so far seemed to be in 

the right place. Ranma just hoped that he wasn't in there too. He 

wandered in the gate and prepared to knock on the door. Before he 

did, he checked his money. He had been intending to get some new 

clothes, he needed a couple of new outfits after the training with 

Cologne and the fight against Happosai. Since that may be all he 

had in the world, he thought that he ought to try and go easy on it.

     Ranma knocked, then waited till the door opened. It was Nabiki, 

perfect. She looked at him intently. He looked at her. Eventually he 

broke the deadlock and spoke. "Do you know who I am?"

     "No. Should I?"

     "I'm not sure about that at the moment. Are you still in the 

business of selling information?"

     Nabiki got a predatory grin. "You could say that. Who are you 

and what do you want to know?"

     Ranma looked around. "Do you mind if we take a quick walk? I'd 

rather not stand in the doorway all night."

     Nabiki smiled at him then yelled out to her sisters that she was 

going for a walk around the house. Taking the good-looking young 

man by the arm she moved around to the back of the house. Inside, 

Akane peered though a crack in the door. Wow, Nabiki had a 

boyfriend. She hoped he visited again, Nabiki had a hard time getting 

new friends.

      When they were in the side yard, Ranma leapt onto a rock around 

the Koi pond, sat and looked at Nabiki. "OK, Nabiki. I need some 

information, but I'm not sure what questions I can ask until I get some 

of the answers. How do you want to do this?"

     Nabiki shook her head and tried to get a grip on herself. This hunk 

of a man had just done a standing leap across five meters of Koi pond 

only to land seated on a precarious rock. Now he spoke to her again. 

Shaking her head, she asked him to repeat himself. "All right, how 

about you ask a question, then I offer a price. We can negotiate on that 

basis. If I can see your money first."

     Ranma showed his money. It was not a fortune, but if he did not want 

family secrets, it would do for a while. "OK, Nabiki. What can you tell 

me about the Saotomes?"

     Nabiki grimaced. "Business or pleasure? If you're trying to hire 

them, get out now. If you want revenge, come inside and have some tea."

     Ranma was stunned. People really did not like him. "Definitely not 

business. I don't even know what they do. It's more of a... family problem."

     Nabiki chewed on that for a moment. "I suppose that will do. Come 

on in. Being a decent hostess is the least I can do for anyone who isn't 

a friend of theirs."

     Nabiki headed into the house, but pull up short when she saw the boy 

had not moved. "Nabiki, is there anyone else in there which knows them?"

     "No. Dad's off in China settling a debt with them. Kasumi saw them 

once, but that was years ago. Now come on."

     Ranma decided to chance it. Even if everyone hated him, perhaps he 

would be able to fool Kasumi; people can change appearance in a few 

years. Again he leaped over to Nabiki's side. "I've just got to warn you 

about one thing. My name's Ranma."

     Nabiki sharply inhaled her breath. Backing away she began to dig 

into her blouse for something, eventually pulling out a knife. She started 

to call for him to stay back when he realised his mistake. "No, no, it's 

not like that. I really don't think that I'm related to the Saotomes that 

caused you these problems. And I sure ain't gunna hurt you. So calm 

down. I just thought I better warn you before we got inside."

     Nabiki did calm. It made sense really. She knew that Ranma 

Saotome liked to play with his victims, especially the girls, but few 

people would be game to try anything at the Tendo residence. 

Especially with Kasumi and Akane there. Putting the knife back inside 

her shirt, she 

led him inside and sat him at the table while she gathered her sisters 

and some tea.

     When they all arrived, Ranma was glad to see Akane looking so 

well. She even gave him a small smile then blushed. Ranma was 

shocked. He had never seen her blush before. For that matter, it was 

nice to see her smile and not be on the receiving end of a mallet. 

What came as a really shock was when Kasumi came in carrying 

the tea set while wearing a blindfold.

     "Hey, Kasumi, let me help you with that. Is there something 

wrong with you eyes? Should I get Dr. Tofu?"

     Kasumi nodded in his direction. How did he know her name? 

"That's very kind of you, but no thank you. I have been blind for 

several years."

     Immediately realizing that his ability to put his foot in his mouth 

was reaching new heights, Ranma sat silently was the tea was 

poured and they began to drink. When everyone was ready for 

conversation, Nabiki braced her sisters for the similarity in names, 

and then introduced Ranma. Akane looked a bit angry, but Kasumi 

smiled sweetly. Ranma marveled: even with a piece of cloth tied 

around her blind eyes, she was still the beautiful, composed and 

caring mother-substitute he had come to love. "I realize it couldn't 

be him, Nabiki. His voice is similar to Saotome's, but this Ranma 

has a nice voice. It's full of friendship and compassion. Trust me, I'll 

never forget the way he laughed when he did this to me."

     Ranma coughed into his tea. He did that to Kasumi?! He'd kill 

that bastard version of himself when he saw him. No one did that 

to Kasumi and got away with it. Not even him!

     Nabiki saw her guests enraged reaction. "Sorry, Ranma. I guess 

you didn't know about our history with the Saotomes. Since you seem 

to like them as much as I do, this ones on the house."

     Nabiki paused for a moment to sip her tea. "Where should I start? 

Let's see. Sixteen years ago, Genma and Nodoka Saotome have a 

child named Ranma. Nodoka wanted Ranma trained in the Anything 

Goes School under the Tendos as a peace keeping gesture between 

out clans, but Genma disagreed, sometimes quite violently according 

to reports and rumors. When Ranma is five, his mother died under 

mysterious circumstances." Nabiki noted Ranma's darkening 

expression and clenched fists. He is obviously restraining himself 

from some sort of furious outburst, perhaps a normal reaction of a 

stranger to Nodoka's fate but somehow Nabiki didn't think that was 

the case.

     "Ranma's father takes him and has him trained in the Arts of Ninjitsu. 

Since the age of twelve, Ranma and Genma have been assassins par 

excellence. Six months ago they returned from a mission to China. 

Since then we have had a Chinese family move here to follow them. 

I kind of gather that Ranma and Genma moved here to avoid some 

legal problem where they were."

     "Apparently our families have had a grudge going back twenty 

years or so... something to do with daddy's Martial Arts master. 

Whatever it was, ten years ago, Genma killed.... killed... killed our 

mother." Nabiki broke down and sobbed for a few moments, causing 

Kasumi to move closer and comfort her. Ranma's response, a 

whitening of his knuckles as his fists clenched tighter, went unnoticed 

by the sistes.

     Akane continued the story. "Three years ago, Ranma, err, Saotome 

came back to help his father continue to repay their 'debt'. He drugged 

everyone, then tied up daddy and made him watch. The three of us were 

blindfolded, but Kasumi's came loose. So he blinded Kasumi, and Nabiki, 

well..." Nabiki waved shakily at him with both hands. A thumb and three 

fingers were on each, with only faded scars showing where her pinkies 

once were. Ranma paled. Slowly he looked at Akane and counted her 

fingers. She had all of them. 

     "Did... did he do anything to... to you?" Ranma asked, dreading 

whatever answer he might get in return.

     Akane dropped her head and looked at the table. She was saved 

from answering by the sound of the phone. Akane dashed off to answer 

it. Nabiki favored Ranma with a hard look. "That's not for sale. Don't ask."

     Incredibly Ranma went even paler, and a thin trail of blood leaked from 

within his fists, where his fingernails now cut into his palms. He wouldn't. 

He couldn't. Not Akane. He couldn't do that. Somehow he might return to 

where he came from, he would have to see Happosai about that, but until 

then, he'd be damned if he let that other Ranma live a moment longer than 

necessary. NO-ONE did that to Akane and got away with it. "I'm gunna 

kill that bastard. I've never wanted to kill anyone before, but for him, I'll 

make an exception." His voice came out as a deep growl, almost feline 

in nature

     Nabiki stared at him. She could almost swear that there was a blue 

glow coming off him, and his eyes seemed to almost shine with a cat-like 

quality. But that was impossible without some utterance or gesture of a 

spell, so it must be a trick of the light. Akane returned and placed a 

sheathed sword on the table in front of Kasumi. "That was Shampoo. 

She says that Ra... Saotome is back in Nerima. Apparently he's came 

over there to force her into marriage again."

     Ranma banged his fist on the table, an act that left a visible crack in 

the cedar. "When I catch that sorry... Err, if he's this hotshot ninja, will 

you girls be OK?" His sudden change from outrage to open concern for 

their welfare seemed to relieve the tension that the sisters were feeling.

     Nabiki smiled. "Thanks for asking, Ranma, you really are a gentleman. 

We should be fine."

     "Should be..." Ranma brooded for a moment. "That's not good enough. 

Listen, I know we've just met, but... would you mind if I stayed in the dojo? 

I'd like to be near in case he does try anything."

     The girls looked at each other. Having a strange boy on their property 

did not really appeal to them. Having Ranma Saotome back in Nerima 

when everyone thought he was in China was even worse. This Ranma 

seemed a bit strange, scary even, but paradoxically each of them felt 

extraordinarily safe in his presence even when he was at his scariest. 

More like he was some sort of guardian avatar rather than the cruel 

epitome of evil that the other had been to them. Looking to Akane for the 

final approval, they finally nodded OK. Akane herself made the offer: "All 

right. But no coming into the house during the night unless you hear us 

screaming. And if you do come in, I expect you to yell enough to wake 

everyone up. I have an aversion to people sneaking around."

     That settled, Ranma wandered up to the guest-room with Nabiki and 

Akane to get some blankets. "So, Akane. I see the sign out the front still 

says Anything Goes School of Martial Arts. Has Mr. Tendo been teaching 

you?"

     Akane smiled, making his heart leap. "Yes. Currently I'm the women's 

free-style Martial Arts Champion in Nerima. Next year I'm going to be 

competing for the Tokyo title. Why, do you train?"

     "You could say that..."

     "Well, would you like a match?"

     "Feh! Just so long as you don't mind losing to a guy."

     Akane laughed and nodded. Ranma grabbed the blankets and 

jumped out the window. The girls dashed over and saw him sprinting 

for the dojo, jumping rocks in the dark as though this was his own 

home.

     "I always thought the stairs were a good way to get down," Nabiki 

made the observation with a dryness that she really wasn't feeling. "Hey, 

Akane. I think this guy is good to have around. I haven't seen you smile 

or laugh so much in years."

     Akane winced a bit. "I still don't like men, but... I guess he could 

grow on you."

     The three sisters went out to the dojo. Nabiki was just there to watch. 

Hopefully he would take off his shirt when he fought. She could see he 

was well built, and he would definitely look better without a shirt. Probably 

look better without pants too... Kasumi was there as moral support. She 

might not be able to watch, but her training let her track fighters easily 

with sound.

     After Akane warmed up, they fought. Kasumi could tell there was 

something wrong immediately. She could hear Akane's footsteps, and 

she could hear her moving, but from Ranma there was scarcely a sound. 

When she concentrated, she could hear his regular breathing, but that 

was all. Whatever he was doing, it was not fighting.

     Nabiki was as concerned as Kasumi, but for different reasons. She 

knew Akane was good. She had watched her fight in many tournaments. 

Akane could flatten most girls with one punch, and she was fast enough 

to be able to carry the fight to the best of them. Ranma on the other hand, 

hardly seemed to pay her any attention. He just stood there, bending, 

bobbing and weaving. When Akane started using more sweeping attacks, 

he hopped over them, or stepped back, all with perfect grace and poise.

     "You're better than I was expecting, Akane."

     "Will you stand still and let me hit you!?"

     "Oh, come on, a slow-poke like you couldn't even catch a bus. Keep 

trying."

     This went on for a while, until Ranma hopped over one of her attacks 

and reached over gently poked a finger to her forehead. "An opening!"

     Akane stopped and stood puffing. Ranma bowed to her. "Well done 

Akane. Your technique's much better."

     "What do you mean better?"

     "I... err.... Just that you must be a lot better for having studied with your 

father than I was expecting for someone our age..."

     Nabiki eyed Ranma. Something seemed a bit wrong, but she could not 

place it. "So Ranma, do you have a last name?"

     Ranma started to reply then hesitated. "No. Not anymore. I did a while 

ago, but... but I can no longer be a part of the family I once had. And yes, 

there was someone I lo- umm... liked a lot, but... but I think she might be 

gone too." Not that he and his Akane got along all that well, but he did find 

himself missing her.

     Everyone was silent for a while at that one. When thunder rumbled in 

the distance, Kasumi stood up. "Thank you for offering to stay and protect 

us. I am sure father will appreciate it. We will see you in the morning."

     As the sisters entered the house, Nabiki reset the wards that protected 

the Tendo estate. A few more activated seemed to be a reasonable expense, 

given the news that Ranma Saotome was back 



PASTE CHAPTER ONE PART TWO HERE

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When given the constants a, b and c, and the variables x, y and z...

I often find it helpful to concentrate on point q



Tangent

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