Subject: [FFML] [Fanfic][alt][R1/2] Polarity ch01b [DRAFT 2]
From: "Tangent" <tangent@zbzoom.net>
Date: 12/15/2000, 7:15 PM
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PASTE TO CHAPTER ONE, PART ONE HERE



in Nerima. And perhaps another active layer around the Dojo as well. 

It wouldn't do for their guest to be murdered, after all - or to turn out to 

actually be a murderer. She honestly didn't know why they were even 

trusting the boy this far, but she certainly wasn't going to drop her 

guard any further...



     After they left, Ranma lay down to sleep. Apparently Ryoga had 

been successful, as odd as that seemed. He was somewhere that 

everyone hated his name. Hated his face even. However, they did not 

hate him specifically, only his counterpart. He did not do the things the 

other Ranma had. Someday he would return to his own world, he hoped. 

Before then, though, he would make that bastard copy of himself pay for 

what he did to Akane, to the Tendos, to his mother, to Shampoo, to 

everyone. Despite his brooding anger, worry and concern, he drifted off 

to sleep with the endless drone of rain beating off of the dojo...

     The sound of Akane screaming dragged him from his bed. Out the 

door in a heart-beat, Ranma neglected to notice the change that the rain 

brought her as she sprinted around the corner of the house for Akane's 

window, her internal clock said it was about three in the morning. 

Remembering what Nabiki had cautioned her about during the evening, 

she began to shout. "Nabiki! Kasumi! Wake up! Wake up!"

     In a single hop she was on Akane's window-sill, opening the locked 

fixture with practiced ease, just wide enough to enter, in less time than 

it took to draw another breath. Still calling for the girls, she looked around 

her room. No one there, and Akane was just starting to sit up. Damn, she 

had woken everyone for a nightmare. Well, better safe than sorry. Ranma 

gathered Akane into her arms, trying to calm and comfort her, but was at 

a loss as to what to do after that...

     Nabiki entered behind the sword wielding Kasumi and flicked on the 

light. Kasumi might be able to function in the dark, but she couldn't. 

Everyone had woken to the sounds of Akane's screams, only to here 

other yells only a second later. Looking at the redheaded girl who held 

her sobbing sister, Nabiki was glad she brought her knife. Anyone who 

could slip into the house without disturbing the wards was, by definition, 

dangerous. Then again, why was the redhead rocking Akane and trying 

to comfort her? "Who are you? What are you doing here?"

     "I'm Ranma, remember? I heard Akane screaming, but there was 

no-one here."

     Kasumi could instantly spot the girls voice, and placed her sword 

towards her. "Ranma is a boy. Answer if you value your life."

     Ranma looked down at herself and groaned. "Sorry about this. I 

forgot you didn't know. I'm cursed. I change sex in cold water."

     Nabiki crossed to the bed and prized Akane from the strange girl's 

arms. "Bullshit. Kasumi, take this girl downstairs. I be there as soon 

as I calm down Akane."

     At sword point, Ranma descended. When she reached the bottom, 

he turned to Kasumi. "Do you want some tea while we're waiting?"

     Kasumi held her feelings of hospitality in check. This girl was an 

invader and had probably attacked her sister. She could wait without 

tea. "I'm not taking my hands off this sword until you're out of here."

     A few minutes later a composed Akane accompanied her sister down 

to the living room. When she got there, she admired the girl. She was 

very cute, even if a trifle damp from the rain still. "Kasumi, it was just a 

nightmare. After I started screaming, I... I felt her holding me. I... I just 

kept hearing Saotome... and fe-fealing... what he did to me... all over 

again. Thank you for your help, but who are you?"

     Ranma sighed again. "I told you, I'm Ranma, the guy that was in 

the dojo. I've got a curse that changes me into a girl. Look, Nabiki, 

could you get me some hot water please?"

     Nabiki prodded the girl in the chest. "She certainly seems like a 

girl to me. I really don't think they're fakes. Could be Ranma was a girl 

in disguise, but I don't see why."

     "ARRRG! Will someone get me some hot water, or will I get it 

myself?"

     Kasumi: "Move and you lose your head."

     Nabiki: "What do you need hot water for?"

     Akane: "How did you get in my window?"

     "IT'S TO REVERSE MY CURSE! Forget it, I'll serve myself!"

     Rolling backwards, Ranma sprang to her feet, moving under 

Kasumi's sword strike. In a moment she was headed for the kitchen, 

and Akane and Kasumi were following. Even as Kasumi swung at her, 

she moved to the correct cupboard and grabbed a familiar yellow kettle. 

While she filled the kettle, she parried Kasumi's swift attacks with one 

hand. Every cut or stroke Kasumi made, the girl would tap the flat of 

the blade with her bare hands and deflect it. Akane watched in 

amazement. Even to attempt such a thing was a joke, but to succeed 

was beyond incredible.

     When the kettle was filled and on the stove, the girl turned her full 

attention to Kasumi. "It's not nice to play with sharp toys, Kasumi. 

Someone, even me, could get hurt." 

     Faster then anyone could see - or sense, in Kasumi's case - she 

reached out and pulled the sword from Kasumi's hands. Placing it on 

the bench behind her, she sighed and looked at Akane. "You tried to 

hit me this evening, and you couldn't. Do you want to try again, or can 

we wait for the water to heat?"

     The girls growled but relented. The kitchen exit was blocked, but if 

she wanted to get out, she could have done it long ago. Eventually the 

girl pulled the kettle off the stove and poured water over her head. 

Kasumi heard her sisters fall to the floor, and took a fighting stance. 

She could not hear any new attackers. Then Ranma spoke. "I warned 

'em what to expect, and still they faint."

     "Oh, Ranma-kun. When did you get here? Did you see a girl leaving?"

     "Damn, sorry Kasumi, I forgot you couldn't see me change. Give me 

your hand for a second. OK, feel it? That's my chest. Now I'll pour some 

cold water. Do you get it?"

     Under her hand, she felt her point of contact lower by several inches, 

and swell into the soft firmness of a girl's breast. At the same time, the 

voice rose in pitch. Unmistakably, Ranma had changed into the girl 

they had been talking to.

     "Oh my."



     The sun was shining when Ranma finally managed to convince the 

Tendo girls and to explain what had happened about his curse. Nabiki 

was cynically refusing to believe in shape-changing magic curses, as 

no magic she ever heard of allowed continuous and instant fluctuation 

of form after the initial effect, curse or otherwise. And certainly not 

without some sort of accompanying pain. The fastest metamorphosis 

on record took place in just under five minutes, and the poor fellow had 

passed out from the agony of such a rapid shift in physiology. Yet here 

was Ranma, changing back and forth almost instantly with the 

application of hot or cold water, never once complaining of even the 

slightest discomfort. Unfortunately, she was having a hard time coming 

up with a better explanation than a magical curse.

     Akane sat there for a while, then got permission to try for herself. 

After a while she got the hang of it, and spent almost three hours 

changing him from one sex to another as quickly as water could heat. 

"I could get to enjoy this!"

     "I'm sure you would," Ranma responded dryly, remembering back 

to when Ukyo had responded similarly to discovering his curse. 

Granted, he was accepting their behavior towards him with better grace 

this time, largely because he realized that they weren't entirely 

comfortable with him. If this is what it took to ease their mind, they 

could change him as often as they needed too...

     When Kasumi began to place breakfast items on the table, Akane 

ceased playing with her gender-changing toy. Ranma watched her as she 

took the kettles and buckets away, she was much quieter and gentler 

than the Akane she knew. For that matter, despite what she had said 

last night, she was also a lot slower than the Akane she knew. Her 

tomboy was fast and strong. This girl had much better technique, but 

Ranma honestly believed that she wouldn't last the warm up against 

the Akane he knew. 

     Ranma joined them at the breakfast table and noticed something 

when reaching for the food. She was still a she. Moving her hand, he 

grabbed the tea kettle and prepared for a very hot transformation. 

"Ranma-kun, would you mind not changing? Akane gets a bit 

nervous sometimes. I suspect that she just wanted to have a friendly 

girl around for a while. Will you be going to school?"

     That one stopped Ranma for a bit. To school or not to school? 

Sighing she realized that school probably was necessary. For that 

matter, if she kept up studying, her teachers wouldn't get on her case 

too much when she returned. "Hmm, you could be right Kasumi. I think 

I'd better go to school. For that matter, it might be better if I went as a 

girl. It might make things a bit... easier for a while. Say! Will you be all 

right if we go off to school. I know you've got the sword and everything, 

but what if Saotome comes here?"

     Kasumi laughed. It was a beautiful sound. So full of life and happiness, 

just the sound to fill the emptiness created by such unpleasant thoughts. 

"Don't worry, Ranma-kun. I'll head off the same time as you kids, and 

spend the day with my fiancee."

     Ranma sat spell bound as Kasumi wiggled her fingers at her. On 

one hand she had a gold engagement ring, with quite a large diamond. 

"Err... Kasumi... I... I didn't realize. Is... is it Dr. Tofu?"

     Kasumi gave her patented smile and laughed happily again. "Of course 

it is Ranma-kun. Do you know Dr. Tofu? He so lovely, always so kind. 

There's really no-one like him."

     Ranma chuckled a little. "Oh, I'm not sure that's right, Kasumi. I 

can think of one person who's every bit as nice as Dr. Tofu, and the 

lucky man happens to be marrying her."

     Kasumi blushed and the two packed away the dishes in a 

contented silence. Kasumi would wash, and Ranma put them away 

while they waited for Akane and Nabiki to get ready for school. In a 

few minutes the kitchen was sparkling clean again. When the four 

headed off for school (and Tofu's, which was along the route) Kasumi 

pondered Ranma. She seemed so nice, but several things just did not 

fit. Firstly, she seemed to know them all well. She knew Akane's skill, 

she knew Nabiki's habits of selling information. She also put away every 

plate and glass without hesitation, and that meant that she knew her 

kitchen. Ranma knew just a little bit too much for her to be comfortable.

     On top of that, despite the fact that she had reacted with much better 

grace that her sisters had to Ranma's 'curse', Kasumi knew full well the 

medical reasons why rapid metamorphosis caused pain in those who 

indulged in it. What Ranma had done was no illusion - while illusions 

could be touched, they had to be seen to be effective, which made 

Kasumi immune to them. Either Ranma had a tolerance of pain that 

was quite simply beyond all human norms, or her 'curse' didn't hurt 

at all...

     Kasumi was just about to separate from the group to see her 

fiancee when Ranma spoke up. "I've been thinking. Since everyone 

here seems to jump at the name Ranma, perhaps we should try 

something I usually do when I'm in my cursed form. Maybe Ranko, 

or perhaps Yoiko..."

     Nabiki and Kasumi were not very keen. They both had alarm bells 

ringing about this Ranma. Something just did not add up. If Ranma 

Saotome was back in Nerima, then there was the possibility that this 

was him, playing one of his little games. Nabiki had never heard of a 

spell which could change someone's sex so easily... but stranger 

things had occurred.

     Akane, on the other hand, was over the moon. She immediately 

latched onto Ranma's arm and batted her eyes at her. "Oh, I like 

Ranko! You really are a wild child! Hey, after school you want to come 

back to the dojo? We could do some sparing again. I'm sure that there's 

lots you could teach me, you were so good!"

     'Ranko' looked distinctly nervous, and Nabiki and Kasumi just 

frowned. Their sister could be a bit thick some times, and it looked 

like this was one of them. 'Ranko' definitely was the sort of friend which 

Akane favored, and Nabiki was just a little bit sad that she would not be 

able to have that strong body of his. However, she knew what father would 

say. If Ranma was half boy, and Akane liked him, Father would start 

booking a wedding before the dust could settle.

     After a moment, she knocked herself on the head, reminding 

herself that she didn't trust this strange girl. Why was she suddenly 

so enamored for her male version? It didn't make any sense!

     As they continued on to school, Akane held Ranko's hand and 

explained about their school and the strange Principle they had. He 

was a bit obsessive about haircuts, and had a few strange ideas about 

running a school, but all in all it was a nice enough place to study. 

They had almost reached the school gates when they saw a crowd 

of boys. Akane released Ranko's hand, and charged into the attacking 

fray. 

     Ranko turned to Nabiki in shock. In her world, these fights had 

ended within days of her arrival, and she had mostly forgotten them. 

Looking at Nabiki, she struggled to put her surprise into words. 

Nabiki took pity on the neo-girl and led her around the fight. "Yes, 

this happens every morning. Gosunkugi decreed that anyone who 

wanted to date Akane had to defeat her in combat. After all Akane's 

been through, you'd think he could be a bit more tolerant, but that 

guy's so obsessed he couldn't see anything other than himself."

     Ranko could barely believe her ears. "Go... Gosunkugi!? Gosunkugi 

told people to do this... and they did it?"

     "Yeah. Makes you sick, doesn't it? But still, everyone's afraid of 

him, so they sort of follow his orders."

     Akane was finished, so they walked over to her and headed for 

the school building. "I don't believe it. People are afraid of Gosunkugi?"

     "Sure, no one can defeat him, and no-one comes anywhere near 

him in power. He's probably the strongest mage in Nerima!"

     When Ranko collapsed in shock, Akane carried her into class. 

Nabiki wandered off thoughtfully. What they said was true. Gos-kun 

was the best. He might not be as rich as Kuno-chan, but he had lots 

of potential. A talented mage could have the world as his oyster, 

especially if he had someone to guide him. Then again, the best way 

to deal with Ranko may be to have someone with a little magical 

experience have a look at that 'curse' of his. Perhaps a word in 

Gosunkugi's ear...



     Akane and Ranko were out in the grounds eating lunch when 

Gosunkugi walked up. He looked the same as Ranko remembered, 

but then, her Gosunkugi could not even command the respect of the 

cockroaches, let alone command the sorts of power that Akane had 

told her about. Gosunkugi on the other hand was thoroughly 

unimpressed by Ranko. She looked like a Martial Artist, and he had 

not been beaten in a fight since Elementary School when his powers 

first manifested. Adjusting his vision to look in the magical and etheric 

planes, Gosunkugi could not detect any sort of magic around Ranko. 

She showed signs of having magically blessed... but most of the usual 

magical fluxes were not present. If Nabiki had seen anyone other than 

Ranko, it must have been an illusion spell cast at the time.

     Nice enough looking, but Nabiki had expressed a concern that her 

sister was falling for this stranger. As always, Gosenkugi refused to 

come to terms with Akane's interest in girls, or the reasons why her 

interests lay that way. While they appeared innocent enough, just sitting 

together like friends, Nabiki was seldom wrong when it came to reading 

people's motives. It had to be better with her own family, right?

     "So, it is true! You have decided to mock my word and date with 

the lovely Tendo Akane. Despite the fact that you are a member of the 

fairer sex, you are still bound by my commands! Even more so, since 

you would attempt to pervert this innocent girl with your strange desires. 

No! If you would date with her, you must beat her in combat!"

     Ranko just looked a t Gosenkugi through half-lidded eyes, thoroughly 

unimpressed. "I did."

     Gosunkugi turned beet root purple in rage. "You claim that you could 

be someone as good as my flower? Very well, you must also beat me 

before I would accept your advances on her!"

     "'Scuse me Akane. This will only take a moment."

     Even as Akane protested, Ranko stood up, then launched a blow 

at Gosunkugi. She could see he was a wimp, so she wouldn't go all 

out. When the blow stopped an inch from his face, Gosunkugi laughed. 

"Feh! Your pitiful attacks can never penetrate my shield spell! Surrender 

now and renounce you attempts on Akane's virtue and affections, or 

face your punishment!"

     Ranma snarled and took a fighting stance. Maybe there was some 

truth to what Akane had said about magic. "You make me sick, Gos. 

You're worse than Kuno ever was. He wanted Akane because he loved 

her. You just see her as an object, a toy. Akane's someone special, 

and I l... I l... I like her, so back off, or your gunna get hurt!"

     Neither Akane and Gosunkugi could not quite understand Ranko's 

references to Kuno. Although he was rich and a talented Kendo fighter, 

he was still only one of the hordes of boys which wanted Akane. At 

Ranko declaration of appreciation for Akane, they had quite distinctly 

different reactions. Akane clasped her hands beneath her chin, and 

looked like she was in heaven. Gosunkugi looked like he was in hell. 

To help spread the misery, he summoned a small fireball in 

one hand with a rapid utterance of a spell and threw it at Ranko. That 

should take the fight out of her.

     Ranko saw the small orange ball coming for her and leaped straight 

into the air. The fireball passed underneath her, and exploded against a 

tree in the distance. When she landed, Ranko sent a series of kicks 

and punches against Gosunkugi's shield. None of them managed to 

penetrate, but they knocked him back a step. Watching in the distance, 

Nabiki went white as a sheet. She wanted Gos-kun to scare Ranko, 

maybe force her to drop whatever spell she used to change sex. 

Instead, it looked like Gos-kun was going to kill her. This wasn't what 

she had wanted at all!

     This time Gosunkugi summoned two, much larger, fireballs with a 

harsher invokation, and when he threw them, they also flew faster. 

Ranko dodged them both, but was singed slightly when she got too 

close. Moving in, she launched a series of blows that could have 

shattered a brick wall. Again all she did was knock him back.

     They kept this up for a few more passes. By this time, Gosunkugi's 

shield was starting to weaken from the massive damage it had stopped. 

In the past, he had helped the police and fought against killers with 

guns, and even then he had not been as hard pressed as he was now. 

The girl was an impossible target, even after he had cast a haste spell 

on himself. No one should be able to move that quickly, and she did 

this without any sort of magical aura. He did not even want to think 

how much those blows would have hurt if they contacted. Time to end 

this once and for all.

     A rapid, sing-song and nonsensical utterance later, and a sheet of 

flame grew up around the mage as he laughed insanely. "Now know 

true fear! You will never defeat me, since every time you attack, you 

will only hurt yourself."

     Ranko looked around at the crowd that had gathered. Probably a 

bit too close, but she thought her control was better than when she 

first tried it... Moving around in a circle, she continued to dodge the 

lightning and fire that Gosunkugi was throwing. When she reached the 

inside of her spiral, she screamed and threw her icy punch. 

"HIRYUU SHOTEN HA!"

     Gosunkugi never even saw what was coming. It should have been 

a physical impossibility to do what this girl did without magic. When 

she finally struck, the blow did not even land. Instead, he found himself 

in the center of a massive whirlwind. Sucked up into the air, he was 

battered and blasted by rocks and sand. When the Rising Dragon 

Ascension finally ended, he was dropped unceremoniously on the 

ground from almost sixty meters. His magical shield saved him from 

death, but he was concussed badly. As he lost consciousness, he 

marveled at the sheer raw elemental power that Ranko had displayed, 

all without once emitting any kind of magical aura. Truly another worthy 

of his greatness...

     Ranko walked over to the body on the ground and nudged it with her 

toe. No movement other than ragged breathing was evident. "I guess 

that makes me the winner. And I say, Akane can do what she wants, 

when she wants! Anyone who objects to treating Akane normally, they're 

gunna answer to me!"

     Everyone was too stunned to answer. Magic was a common class at 

Furinkan, just like learning another language, only more useful, and it 

required greater natural talent. Everyone had been required to do a year 

of magic when they were young: it wouldn't do to miss out on a 

high-class mage just because they chose they wrong subjects. Over 

half of the students watching were magically sensitive to one degree 

or another, and every one of them swore that Gosunkugi was the only 

person using magic. 

     It shouldn't be possible to do what Ranko had done without it.

     The school was a buzz with rumors and discussion. The two hottest 

topics were Ranko and Ranko. How did she beat Gosunkugi, and was 

she Akane's latest friend? Most of the girls knew Akane's disposition, 

but since she respected them enough to treat them normally when 

they said no, they respected her enough to remain her friends. All of 

her close friends knew what Saotome Ranma had done to her, and they 

brought anyone back into line if they tried to make life difficult for her.

     One of Akane's friends, Natsuko, decided to go over to Akane's place 

that night. If Ranko really was staying in their dojo, it might help the girl if 

she knew how Akane probably felt, before Akane told her. Not every girl 

reacted well when another girl told them that they were in love. Natsuko 

wanted to tell her in class, but Nabiki had come in with the teacher and 

told Akane and Ranko that they were needed at home.

     Akane, Nabiki and Ranko ran home. When Kasumi had called the 

school, she said that she and Tofu had gone home, and that they 

should meet them there. Apparently their father had called from China, 

and wanted to speak to everyone. 



END CHAPTER ONE



     A WORD FROM TANGENT: From here on out, Polarity will be 

written by me. I changed the title from Hated, because while Fire has 

given me permission to continue the story, he still plans to do so 

himself following a different track than what I outlined to him when I 

asked. Eventually, I may get around to adding more to this first chapter, 

rather than just the bits and pieces I already put into this draft of it.

     By the way - apologies to Fire. Many of my 'spelling' corrections 

were to Americanize British spellings of common words. Some of the 

grammar corrections were probably of a similar nature, due more to 

cultural differences between us rather than inherent inaccuracies in 

our own writing styles...





~~~



When given the constants a, b and c, and the variables x, y and z...

I often find it helpful to concentrate on point q



Tangent

tangent@zbzoom.net





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