Subject: [FFML] [fic][Suikoden] Distant Shores #3: Into The Woods
From: Scott Jamison
Date: 1/9/2001, 7:21 PM
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This is the latest entry at Improfanfic, http://www.improfanfic.com .

It's loosely based on the Suikoden series of videogames....







  

     "A true weaponsmith does not merely sharpen swords.  He must be

knowledgeable about all forms of weaponry, from bow to sling, from

spear to scarf.  He must be able to bring out the hidden strengths of

each, knowing just the right improvements to make.  It is said that

even a pointed stick can slay a dragon, if it has been in the hands

of a master smith."

     --From "The Lesser Magics and Why You Should Respect Them," by

N. DuNord



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                     Suikoden: Distant Shores

             Created by Kristen Smirnov and Todd Harper

                   Part Three:  Into the Woods

                        by Scott K. Jamison

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     "Berry picking?  I thought you said you didn't believe in

treating soldiers like servants."  Lierni looked cross, which had

been her usual expression since being captured.

     "I don't," replied Kyrina.  "Foraging is a part of any soldier's

duty.  And looting will only carry us so far.  As it happens, the

prickle berries in the nearby forest are now in season.  Thus, berry

picking duty."

     Tavia cast her mind back to her childhood, not that long gone. 

"Prickle berries?  They make a nice jam, but they're not so good for

eating raw."

     Lierni managed a moment of wistfulness.  "Jam would be nice..."

she murmured.  Her face turned sour again as she looked down at the

hard bread that passed for breakfast.

     "Fine then."  Kyrina brushed an errant strand of hair behind her

ear.  "Hurry up then, we'll want to catch the most of the morning

light."

                     ------

     Despite Kyrina's words about duty, there weren't any other

"soldiers" visible in the party assembled just inside the keep's

gate.  Tavia and Lierni had been joined by half-a-dozen older women,

all obviously used to working the soil. There was also a boy about

the same age as Reid, in a craftsman's tunic, who wore thick canvas

gloves.  He stared at the girls with obvious curiosity.  A pile of

baskets lay nearby.

     One of the women clucked over the sorry state of Tavia's

uniform, and promised to mend it later.  "Can't have you looking a

fright, dearie!"  Her cronies cackled in appreciation of what was

obviously an old joke.

     Kyrina and Reid approached, the latter carrying something in his

arms.  He was talking to the woodswoman.

     "Really sorry about this, but Commander Senrou said I had to do

it today.  I guess you're on your own in the forest."  He stopped

just short of the berry pickers.  "Good morning, Tavia, Lierni."

     "Good morning, Reid."  Tavia looked at Li, but the other girl

was pointedly ignoring the squire.

     "You'll probably need this," said Reid as he handed over Tavia's

sai.

     "B-but...you're giving it back?"

     Kyrina nodded.  "The local woods is no Erisan Forest, but there

are wild animals and the odd monster or two.  I'm good, but I can't

protect everyone at one time. You're on your honor not to turn that

on me, of course."

     "Of course," Tavia replied.  "What honor I have."

     "And your glove, Miss Totorika."  

     Lierni actually gave a smile as she donned the leather gauntlet.

 Her familiar blurred into visibility as she chucked it under the

beak.  "I've missed you too, Arrano."

     The bird disappeared to the non-physical realm, and the gates

opened to let the party out.

                        ------

     Kyrina took point, and the older women followed, leaving the

three young people bringing up the rear.

     Tavia took a better look at the boy.  He was about average in

height, with a ruddy face and squinty eyes suggesting he spent a lot

of time near a fire.  But he didn't have the build of a smith, and

she wondered what his craft was.

      Whatever it might be, it apparently paid well, as a faint

jingle came from the full large canvas pouch at his belt.

      Lierni had heard it too.  "I'm surprised you carry such a heavy

purse.  Rebels can't pay too well."

      The boy grinned, showing a gap where an upper incisor should

have been.  "It isn't money, Miss."  He had a slight accent that

Tavia placed as coming from the far north of the archipelago.  "My

name's Pane Panschild, and I'm a glassmaker."

      Waiting a moment for Li to introduce herself and not having it

happen, Tavia said, "I'm Tavia Reinschild, and she's--"

      "Lierni Totorika, I heard.  Any relation to the Lindael

Totorikas?  My old master, Respo, trades with them."

      Lierni gave a curt nod.  "Yes.  His work is good.  Or so my

mother says."

      They all ducked to avoid a low-hanging branch.

      "Do rebels need a glassmaker?  It's rather a luxury, isn't it?"

asked Tavia.

      "Yah, that it is," admitted Pane.  "And there's no room in the

keep for me to ply my trade.  But I owe Commander Senrou a debt, and

until I can find a Window crystal, I can't be a master anyway."

                        ------

      They had arrived at a berry patch, and the group spread out to

cover more ground.  Tavia started on a bush, then noted that Li

hadn't moved.

      "What's the matter?"

      The mage frowned.  "How are you supposed to pick these things? 

There's all those little thorns in the way."

      Indeed, the reddish-purple berries grew very close to their

defense.

      Tavia chuckled a bit.  "That's why they're called prickle

berries.  You just have to be careful, like this."  She slid her hand

in gently, and plucked a berry, then drew it out, only to catch the

fleshy part of her thumb on a thorn.  "Ow!"

      "Careful, eh?"

      "It's been a few years since I did this last.  My hands must

have become bigger while I was at the Academy."  

      The Academy...Tavia had almost forgotten about it for a moment.

 The pang in her heart was nearly as painful as her thumb.  She

sucked on the wound for a moment.

      She steeled herself.  Time enough for sorrow later.  "Let's try

that again."

      This time she was more successful, and the girls soon got into

the proper rhythm for picking, despite a few scratches.

                          -----

      The sun hung high at noon, and the group took a break.  One of

the older women had a balm for scratches, and Tavia flexed her hands

to keep them from cramping.

      "Mind if I join you?" asked Pane.

      The boy's gloves, now hanging at his side, were stained with 

berry juice.  Then again, he wasn't scratched.

      "I don't mind," said Tavia.  Li didn't contradict her, and the

boy sat down beside them.

      They started gnawing the midday meal, more hard bread with a

few of the berries.  "A bit bitter, but not bad," commented Li. 

"Probably quite nutritious."

      Pane looked a bit nervous as he asked, "Is it true that you

attacked the foraging party, and crippled a man?"

      "They attacked our school first!" Tavia snapped.

      Li had her mouth open, but failed to say anything.  Evidently,

Tavia had stolen her line.

      "Sorry, sorry.  Just curious."  Pane rubbed his short hair

anxiously.

      "I've heard a bit of high-minded talk," said Li, "But I've seen

nothing yet that convinces me you `rebels' are anything but robbers

with delusions of grandeur."

      "Couldn't tell you, I don't follow all that political talk too

well.  But I know Commander Senrou's a good man, and if he believes

this cause is just, then it's okay by me."  Pane punctuated his

statement with a wide-armed gesture.

      "Right.  I have a question for you then.  Why do you need a

Window crystal to be a master?"  Tavia took a swallow of water.  

      Pane sat up straighter.  "Without a Window crystal, it's a lot

harder to purify glass and shape it just so.  And there's colors you

can only get with the aid of Window magic.  So I have to get one if I

want to open my own glass-making business.  And that's why I'm out

wandering the land instead of in a cozy little shop."

      "Couldn't you just buy one?  I know Rune crystals are

expensive, but you could pay in trade, right?"

      "I'm afraid not.  No one knows how to make Window crystals any

more.  Not sure why."

      Li seemed glad to finally have a chance to show her knowledge. 

"It's because only three runemasters ever did, Dylan Windsong and his

two apprentices.  Master Windsong figured out how to make them by

accident, and got rich selling Window crystals to all the glassmakers

of his time.  That's why there's so much famous glassware from about

three hundred years ago.  

      "But none of them ever wrote down the formula, and the two

apprentices died before they took apprentices of their own."

      Pane nodded.  "Figured it was something like that.  Anyhow, the

only ways to get a Window crystal are to have someone give it to you,

and Master Respo isn't ready to retire for a long time.  That, or

find one of the ones that were stolen and hidden away." 

      "So you're treasure hunting?" asked Tavia.

      "More or less."

      Li got up and started walking towards the woods, and Pane

started to follow her.

      Tavia caught his arm.  "You don't want to do that."

      "What?  Oh."  Pane's face turned a little redder.

      "Aah!  Spider!"

      Lierni's scream roused the entire group, and both Kyrina and

Tavia ran towards the sound, with Pane and the older women close

behind.

      When they found the mage, only a short distance into the woods,

her Rune was glowing.

      Tavia looked around for the spider, but didn't see it.  But

maybe that dark patch on the ground?

      Kyrina shouted, "Wait, don--"

      But it was too late, and the blinding flash of lightning arced

from Lierni's hand into the underbrush.

      "Ha!  Got it!" said Lierni, a little wobbly.

      The woodswoman knelt over the impact crater.  "Your aim is

commendable, Miss Totorika.  However, this was a non-aggressive breed

of large spider.  And I'm afraid we won't even be able to salvage the

venom sacs."

      "Oh.  Well, it shouldn't have sneaked up on me like that."  Li

brushed herself off and tried to look dignified.

      Kyrina was equally dignified.  "In future, don't go wandering

off like that.  And please verify your targets.  I'd hate to lose one

of our group to friendly fire."

      Li rolled her eyes.  "As you wish."     

                          -----

      It was a much wearier group that headed back through the woods

at dusk, carrying full baskets of berries, and several rabbits Kyrina

had managed to shoot.

      Tavia had asked the closest of the old women why she was with

these rebels.

      "Because my husband is, dearie.  An army marches on its

stomach, you know.  Someone has to make the food, and patch the

uniforms, and mend the tents and all.  That, and we had nowhere else

to go after Lord Venall stole our farm."

      "Oh.  But--"

      Lierni cleared her throat.  "Oh, Mistress of Forest Beast

Identification?" she asked in a tone of false honey.

      Kyrina turned.  "What?"

      "Is *that* an aggressive species of large spider?"  Lierni

pointed up towards the treetops, where a spider the size of a war

horse was scuttling down towards the party.

      "Yes."  Kyrina readied her bow, while Tavia and Lierni moved in

front of the women.  Just as the spider arrived, Pane stepped in

front as well.

      "You're going to fight that thing with your fists?" asked

Tavia.

      "No, I have a weapon."  Pane dug into his pouch.

      Conversation took a break as the spider leaped.  Kyrina's arrow

lodged itself in one of the beast's eyes, and Tavia got in a solid

hit with her sai.  Lierni maneuvered to get a clear shot with her

lightning, but Pane stepped in front of her.

      "Take that!" he shouted as he threw a glittering multi-colored

substance at the creature.

      It didn't seem to have any effect, and the spider spat a

greenish fluid at Kyrina.  

      "Poison!" she gasped, stumbling as the venom took effect.

      Tavia moved to the side to distract the creature from attacking

Kyrina while she was down.  Close in, she could see a glittering in

the joints of its exoskeleton, where at least some of Pane's weapon

had stuck.  She aimed for a leg, and succeeded in getting the

spider's attention.

      Lierni shoved Pane out of the way and released a bolt from her

Rune.  That shook it.

      Kyrina had uncorked a bottle and was swigging the contents,

presumably an antidote for the poison.

      Tavia continued to harry the spider, which was beginning to

slow.  Then she slipped on some ichor, and it connected with a leg.

      The spider closed in on her, its jaws dripping with venom. 

Then Tavia heard a "No!" and saw another glittering spray hit the

creature's eyes.  This time she could see that it was bits of glass,

and several of them had struck home, blinding the spider.

      Tavia thrust her sai into the beast's thorax, just as another

arrow sank deep into its head, and Arrano buzzed its left side.

      The spider shuddered and died.  Tavia rolled to the right,

narrowly avoiding being pinned.

      There was a brief moment of silence as everyone checked

themselves over, and then a whoop from Pane.

      "Yah!  We did it!"

      "Right." Lierni had her hands on her hips.  "I could have taken

that thing out in half the time if you hadn't gotten in the way.  And

what kind of weapon is broken glass anyway?"

      "Uhh, the one I use?"  Pane backed away a bit.  "For such a

pretty girl, you sure get angry a lot."

      "Don't try flattering me, you bumpkin!  Just stay out of my

path from now on!"

      Kyrina straightened her hair.  "If you children are quite done

squabbling, we need to get back to the keep by nightfall."

      Tavia took another look at the spider.  "You said you wanted

the poison sacs?"

      The woodswoman nodded.  "For making antidote, right."

      Tavia bent over and cut out the sacs.  While she was there, she

noticed something stuck to one side in the spider's mouth.  It was a

small waterproof pouch.

      "Wonder what's in here?"  Tavia opened it to find an assortment

of coins, obviously the property of some traveler who'd fallen prey

to the spider before.

      "You keep those," said Kyrina, suddenly at her elbow.  "Right

of salvage."

      "Can we go now?" asked Li.

      "Yes."  And so they did.  

                      -----

      A bit of meat with the evening meal made it a slightly livelier

affair, and afterwards, some of the soldiers set up drums for dancing

in the mustering area of the keep.

      Tavia enjoyed watching the old-style country dances, as the

soldiers competed to see who could leap the highest.  

      Li grumbled at her side.  "We should be getting some sleep. 

There will be hangovers in the morning, mark my word."

      The music switched to a couples dance, and the men and women

present paired off.

      Pane came over and asked, "Will you dance with me, Miss

Totorika?"

      Li looked at him scathingly.  "Not in a thousand years."

      Tavia sighed.  "I'll dance with you, Pane."  It was a

no-touching dance, and one she knew the steps to, so she didn't mind.

      "Er, thank you."

      They went out to an open area and began to dance.  As they

whirled, Pane asked, "Is it something wrong with me?"

      "How do you mean?"

      Back to back now.  "Lierni.  I get the impression she doesn't

like me."

      "I think she's just upset," Tavia said.  "She's never been one

to calmly accept things.  And we aren't in the best of positions."

      Spin to a different partner and back again.  Pane frowned. 

"It's just, she's so pretty, and I don't want her to be angry at me."

 He looked at Tavia.  "Uh, I'm not saying you're not pretty.  You've

got nice eyes.  Clear, and trustworthy."

      "You are a flatterer."  Tavia smiled.  "But we're still

prisoners here, and we'll probably be your enemies someday."

      The music stopped, and the dancers sat down.

      Li grabbed Tavia's arm.  "How could you smile at him?  He just

wants to take advantage of any girl he can."

      "I don't think he's that bad.  Hmm.  Have you seen Reid at all

since we got back?"

      "No.  Why, are you going to dance with him too?"

      Tavia laughed.  "No, just wondering.  I wonder, too, what

Senrou had him doing today...."  Anything, she thought, to keep from

wondering what Adele was doing....



                  

                      TO BE CONTINUED





New Star this Chapter:  Pane, the Chisou (Earthbound Grandness) Star.



Author's Notes:  In each game of Suikoden, there are the characters

you tend to use a lot, the characters you only use when the game

forces you to, and the characters that don't get much use at all.

      An example of the latter is the "Window" character, whose sole

purpose in the game is to change the color and shapes of the message

window.  Since this is a text medium, that job is, well, pointless. 

So instead, I've given him a minor combat use.

      That said, Pane may never be in the main party again.  Heck,

depending on the plot needs, he might not even be seen until the

Window crystal is found and Tavia recruits him permanently.  But a

fellow can always hope he's useful.

      Thanks to my prereaders, and here's hoping I haven't ruined all

of DiPiCarat's plans....



peace,

SKJAM!





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