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Dave: China is the _third_largest_ country in the world. It covers
three-point-seven million square miles! Care to be more specific?* {* at
this point consider Russia just a bunch of independent states. The year is,
after all, 2007.}<<
Isn't it the third largest *now?* Or is this a different world?
James: Quanhai province.<<
As far as I know, there is no "Quanhai province." Where are you talking
about?
Dave: Wonderful. James, the Quanhai province is more than a third of
China's land mass! How can you be any less specific?!<<
The Qing-hai is a good deal smaller than a third of China's land area.
Unless this a different world.
{Tokyo International Airport, according to James}<<
Doesn't exist anymore in 2007 if you're following EVA continuity. Neither
does the city of Tokyo. Tokyo-3 is a good distance away from the original
city, and as far as I understand it, there isn't an in-city civilian
airport. There also isn't one in the neighboring suburbs.
James: Pay no attention to those whiners. I turned them into real men and
woman the human race could be proud of.<<
Won't bother you too much on the grammar, cuz I'm not that great myself.
It's "women."
James: You are implying that... was a warning shot?<<
It wasn't.
[Overlay semi-transparent scene of a massive explosion ripping up Japan.
Fade out the explosion. James looks around the city and to the mountains in
the distance almost listlessly.]<<
If you're following EVA continuity, it didn't happen in Japan . . . There's
this little thing called the White Moon in Antarctica where they kept the
first angel up until SI. Of course, if you wanna drop that it's fine by me.
Section 6's shoulder.<<
GiTS?
James: Detroit. Damn, this brings back memories.<<
You'd think that Detroit got flooded after the SI . . .
***
Anyways. Since you've pretty much screwed over EVA continuity, there's no
point in making comments about it. The story's your business, and I don't
have any right to butt in. Reading through was . . . fun. That's all for
now.
SeventhOne