Subject: [FFML] [R.5][Eddings][rewritten]Ranmariad ch0
From: muse@neplusultra.org
Date: 1/24/2001, 4:09 PM
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   In the beginning there was nothingness.  From that abyss

arose a single thought.  And that thought was UL.



   Ul waited in nothingness for time untold, until he thought

of the concept of Maiden and Wife.  And so the Universe came

to be, with it's own Purpose behind it.  As Wife follows

Maiden, Mother soon followed Wife and children came forth.

So were the six gods born.



   Belar, sometimes called the 'God of Bears'; strong, brave

and playful.  Soun, the onetime god of life and growth, now

only the god of ruin and eternal sorrow.  Aldur, the god of

knowledge.  Mousse, the god of serpents and swamps. Kuno, god

of lions and honour.  Nabiki, known as the goddess of wealth

and widely acknowledged lady of greed.  Then there was Happosai.

Once the most beautiful of the gods, vain and haughty.  Happosai,

eldest of the children, god of dragons.



   For a time the gods lived in a universe devoid of life, they

wandered amongst the stars alone.  After a time they met on

their favored planet and held conference.  From this conference

all things came, from lowliest insect and the most base of

monsters, to the wonder that is man.  Each of the gods took a

turn creating 'till they came at last to man, that which was

similar to themselves and all gave equally their blessings.



   After man, all were satisfied.  Man was then split into

six tribes and each god took unto themselves one to lead save

Aldur who held himself aloof.  Instead of a tribe, Aldur

took but a few individuals favored to him as his disciples.

These few he taught the ways of sorcery and self-defense, and

they were set apart from the rest of man in that they did not

grow old.   And so these men watched over the tribes of man

for centuries until the War of the Gods.



   Over the centuries Happosai had become perverted and

thought himself First in all creation, even over his father.

Thinking thus he did strike his brother and steal an object

of Power known as The Orb of Aldur.  All the gods rose up

against this, for never before had any of them taken arms

against another, and lashed out against their brother and

his people.  And with the gods came their people, and thus

began the first war.  Happosai and his people were pushed

ever back until, in desperation, he raised up the Orb and

called forth it's power.  The whole earth trembled and

cried out in it's pain, and these cries drove many creatures

insane.  Those we now call 'monsters'.  The ground in front

of the armies rent, the seas rushed in as the continent

was sundered.



   The Orb angered at being used such struck out against

Happosai and withered his body until his appearance was

as twisted as his heart.  It then hardened itself to

all further use, anything trying to bend the Orb to

their will became not.



   Such is the ancient history of the gods my children.

I can tell you no more for night draws nearer and I am

tired.

      ~A storyteller to the children of Rablec's Farm





	The Ranmariad 

	  Book 1 Chapter 0  by Neplusultra

	    These characters belong to me, they belong

	    to the Eddings and Takahashi.



   Gen wandered the road heading deeper into the great

swamp wishing he had never left the side of that old

farmer.  But then he really had needed to leave before

the old man found out that his purse was missing.

Still it was a shame that the old man had been going

north toward Tol Honneth.  It left him no other choice

than to go south...and Gen hated bugs.  And snakes.



   The people of the last village had been kind enough

he supposed.  Well, that is until they'd found him...

um...helping that sweet little thing.  What was her

name...Clarissa, Arissa?  No matter, he'd had to leave

rather quickly that time too.  Maybe he could head back

north out of these swamps in a few days, though he

wasn't exactly sure how to get back to the village.

The swamp had absolutely wretched roads, they were

more like game trails to be exact.



   Gen muttered to himself as he randomly took branching

paths heading deeper and deeper into the swamp for

hours on end.



   Finally he pushed through some vines blocking the

path and stumbled into a clearing with several freshwater

springs.  "Thank the Gods, fresh water!" he cried,

rushing toward the nearest, and promptly tripped over

a loose rock and fell in.



                   ()()()



   The demon-bear that was Gen lay down at the base of

a tree and moaned plaintively.  Or at least he tried

to, a truly disturbing noise came out of his mouth.



   He was hungry.  He hadn't eaten anything good in weeks.

Nothing but bark and reeds and such.  He'd passed some

towns that had some truly delicious smells wafting about.

But for some reason the villagers would scream and drive

him out with sticks and sometimes worse.



   He was tired.  Walking for days did that to people.

Especially people who weren't sleeping well.  He just

couldn't sleep on his back as comfortably as he used to.



   Most of all, he was cold.  He wasn't quite sure, but

that might have had something to do with the blizzard.

All the fur he had wasn't doing much to help out either.

He moaned again.



   Off to the right he heard a scraping sound, sort of

line stone on stone, and saw a little bit of light

through the snow.  Then nothing more for a few minutes.



   "Well, are you going to come in or not?" said a voice

over near the light.  "I'm not going to hurt you.

Come on in." A pause, "Unless you enjoy the idea of

freezing to death."



   Gen walked toward the light, which was coming

from a door at the base of a large stone tower.

Whoever had spoken was nowhere in sight.  Walking

inside he was in a small room with nothing but

a stairway and a few torches... there didn't

even appear to be a door.  Slightly spooked

Gen had made his ponderous way up to the

first landing when a voice drifted down

the stairs to him.  "There's a warm bath for

you just over there.  Go, wash off the ice

and then dry yourself...I won't stand the

smell of wet panda in my study."



   Genma blinked...sure enough there was a

large pool of steaming water and several

sheets of cloth sharing the floor with

him.  He blinked again...what was a panda?

Shrugging he hit his chin on the floor and

growled.  Submersing himself in the water

stung, but oh it was so good to be warm again.

He raised a paw to scratch at his head and,

and "Praise the Gods the curse is gone!"

Surely his host must be a powerful wizard.

Drying himself off he wrapped up in the

cloth and went up into what was apparently

the study and his jaw dropped.



   "Well, I see you are back to normal.

I don't suppose you still have my purse

though do you?"  It was the farmer Gen

had caught a ride with and robbed.

"Sit down at the table, I've made dinner

for you."  He waved his had vaguely

towards a corner near a fireplace where

there was now a table and several dishes

laid out.  "Oh do stop gapeing.  Sit.

Eat.  We'll talk later."



   And so Gens training began.



                   ()()()



Well, I'm doing a rewrite.  I didn't

like the way it was before, and frankly

I like this better.  I mean come on

there were parts bordering on plagiarism

before.  As soon as this is posted

on my page all the rest is officially gone.

Chapter 1 is following later tonight

and it won't be over two years before

I write again.  Sorry about it yeah.

Didn't mean to, but I just...well,

couldn't write.  I do believe I've

lost my prereaders, so if anyone

would like to volunteer please let

me know.  I'd like it if my prereaders

were willing to actually comment on

the story with their thoughts on parts,

I promise to listen.  I might not

change my mind, but I do promise to

listen.  Though if all you would like

to do is correct spelling and grammar

that's ok too.  Lord knows I need that.



v 1.0

Draft    : 1/20/2001

Released : 1/24/2001

Revision : -

Final    : -



Sir Olin 'Neplusultra' Petty

www.neplusultra.org











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