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It would be very very hard for me to go through this line for line and point out the
occasional (and I mean VERY occasional mispelling...not that I'm the best judge of
that mind you) and grammer point. And I must say that's one of the things about this
fic that made it worth reading.
I've been reviewing Tenchi Fanfiction now for over 2 years. I have seen some of the
best and the worst...the worst being on the rise since the Cartoon Network primier of
Tenchi Muyo.
This was by far one of the most erotic, naughty, mischeivous, funny, clever, and just
downright awesome fics I have read in quite a long time. I'd have to say this is
close on to Aikan Muyo levels, and THAT is saying something right there.
It would be impossible for me to go through and point out every last little thing I
found amusing, funny, or just plain liked about this fic. I've already shared it
with many who could not see it, as they were not on the FFML, but they've also
expressed these sentiments as well, and you'll probably hear from a few of them.
All I can say in closing, is that it was my great pleasure to read this. I had a lot
of fun.
I hope to see more of your works in the future. ^_^
K'thardin
"One shall stand, one shall fall."
-Optimus Prime