Wanton Spoilers

THREE YEARS AND AN ETERNITY
(A Short Bishoujo Senshi Sailor Moon Alternate Universe Story)

Directly to the point, how is this in any way, shape or form
Sailor Moon save two names? You never describe Usagi, we never
learn anything about her but she's been dreaming of Emdymion,
who's dead. There is no reason for her to be the Tsukino Usagi
other than the names. You should have titled it original.
 

I have been in love, madly, for three years and an eternity.

I loved the irony in the madly. I had nice, happy cheerful
connotations going and was amused by the switch.

"He didn't even know me," she says softly to me, to anyone, and my
anger collapses the moment she speaks. "I just... I don't know. He
died in a car accident a long time ago, and I have never met him. But
I saw his picture and... and in my dreams..he is my prince." She
trails off wistfully, and I look in hate and envy over the dead grave.

Again, nicely fitting. Wasn't expected.

The descending description of his madness was well done, and I
have nothing but compliments for the prose. Generally a great
short story. 

Miashara
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