Before I begin I must pray that hotmail won't screw this one up too!

Anyhow, let me get on with my comments.

I liked it but it was rather odd at the end.  It had a sort of bitter sweet flavor to it.

Before I end this letter, I just want to say to you, I love you. I can see no other future for me other than the love I have for you. I cannot live without you. I know this may seem the easy way out, but I am a coward. I am sorry if I cause you any pain, but this is all I can do for you. I can only say farewell. I can see I am not needed. But this life is too hard for me. So I say farewell.

A suicide note perhaps?  Well thats how it reads. I wrote a letter like this back in my high school days to a girl who I thought was my " One true love"

Goodbye, my love. -Ryoga Hibiki

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Author's Note: Heh, this came from when I was pining away for this girl i really liked and the girl was really nice to me too. But my best friend outwardly said he wasn't interested but the girl and my friend became closer. I'm probably explaining a lot of relationships in the world and I'm probably not the only one. Anyways, after it became aware to me that I wasn't needed, I just all of a sudden though of Ryoga. And this is what came of it.

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David Choi

Anyhow David Keep up the fantasitc work.
"Funny I don't remember pulling the pin on that grena---BOOOM!"
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