DB Sommer wrote:

Another evil Brian Randall fic:

 Ooh. I'm 'evil' now. I'll post something apropriately 'evil' tomorrow to celebrate.

    This one is Ginrai-- No, that's passe. This one is Corwin's fault.
Yeah, that's it.

Hmm. I've got in idea I need to blame Matthew Lewis on (and he really is to
blame since he's the one that issued the challenge) but aside from that I
always take the blame for what I write.

 Blame is shared. Half is mine. And I get royalties on all future blame...

 Soun said nothing, merely increasing the pitch of his wail slightly,
while everyone else looked at Genma oddly.

Hmm. Wonder what he did now.

 Ouch, that's the only reaction that line evokes? :P

 The part-time panda swore, and started over again. "Ranma can't be
dead. He's destined to marry Akane. He can't defy his destiny, I even
paid a fortune teller to make sure that it would work out!"

Heh. I can see Genma doing that too.

 So can I!

 The shorter girl before her replied tonelessly, "He said only your name
before he became unconscious again."

"Wow! Usually they wait until after sex to go to sleep," the woman murmured.

 Misato: News to me.

 She frowned, wondering, then nodded sharply. "Very well. I'll see him,
then. Has professor Sanada said anything else about him, yet?"

Ah. A Dual! fusion fic. Always nice to see one of those. Have to write the
one DC urged me to do. So that actually makes two fics I'll be able to blame
on others.

 Not the only Dual! fusion I've done, though the other is... well.

"I love you... Akane..."

 Yamano Akane blushed darkly,

Just plain evil. What did  Genma do, buy a prediction from the Oracle of
Delphi? ^_^

 Ouch. That joke has _way_ too many connotations. Bad man! Very bad man!

Hmm Is it 'Dee' or just plain 'D'?

 I think it's 'Dee'. I'd have to look at the name to be more sure...

 The shorter green-haired girl simply stated in her monotone voice, "He
has not said that until you arrived."

Heh. One of these days need to see Eva Rei and Dee meet. I could see it now.

 Can't forget Lain in this!

Rei stared at the short green-haired girl with the glowing eye. For some odd
reason, she felt an inexplicable kinship with her ,one that surpassed the
one she felt for Commander Ikari in intensity.

Rei, felt compelled to say something. Drawing on one of the few experience
has regarding this sort of thing, she held out her hand and said to Dee in
her monotone voice, "Let us become friends. It will be convient."

"Very well," Dee agreed in the same monotone voice. "What should we do, as
friends?"

"Perhaps we can each take turns riding in the other's giant robot and
fighting the menaces that confront us?"

"That would be interesting," Dee said in the same monotone voice that was
being delivered to her by Rei.

 ...

 Akane nodded, swallowing and looking back at the unconscious,
well-built, martial artist before her. He was far too young for her,
but... but... "I wonder," she breathed, "if you believe in destiny..."

Heh. Cute, while maintaining a pleasently evil demenor. Destiny, like
justice, is a subjective thing. :)

 Touche! Thanks (again) for the C&C.

D.B. Sommer