Nuku: Wai!  C&C for Nuku Nuku!

C&C appreciated:

And thus it is received:

Definitely appreciated by both me and Corwin.

Thanks to Brian Randall for pre-reading this.

All-Purpose Jusenkyo Girl Nuku-Nuku

Chapter 2 - Just Two Normal Days in Nerima.

Akane soaked herself in the cold water, letting it numb her senses and
send her into a state of deep relaxation. After all the talks about
fiancees, curses and pink elephants, she decided on doing something to
keep away from all the craziness.

Drowning herself, eh? Makes sense to me.

She doesn't get away that easy ^_^

Even the fact that the furo only

contained cold water couldn't force her away. "No Ranma. No Nuku Nuku.
Just peace and quiet," Akane sighed dreamily.

That train of thought was dashed into a million pieces when a seventy-
pound cat barged in and jumped into the furo, giving her no time to
react.

Hmm. But cats don't like water.

Some cats do ^_^

Actually, Nuku just wanted to change so she can easily talk with Ranma.

When the water receded, Akane opened her eyes and saw a mass of pink
hair covering her vision. 'How?' she thought faintly, remembering the
discussion about Jusenkyo curses. 'So Nuku Nuku is also cursed?'

"Nuku Nuku beginning to like this form. Hi, Akane! You want to take a
bath with Nuku Nuku?"

Nuku-Nuku: I'll start off with the licking.

Akane (while Nuku Nuku starts licking her all over): Ack!

(Akane blissfully drifts into unconsciousness)

Instincts taking over, she tried to push Nuku Nuku off her and leap out
of the furo to get away from the other girl. Instead, her leg caught
with that of the catgirl's, causing her to fall on top of Akane.

Of course.

You knew that was going to happen ^_^

"Nuku Nuku knows!" she responded cheerfully, "But Akane just like Nuku
Nuku! Just as much fun as with Amazon girls!" Due to her exuberance,
she paid no heed to the sickly green shade Akane's skin was turning.

Heh

Actually she was jealous of the Amazons ^_^

"And what did I tell you about wearing clothes?!" Akane could hear
Ranma exclaim in a disapproving tone of voice. "Just look what you did
to that poor man that lets us stay here!"

Heh the Second

This is Corwin's doing ^_^

"Hey, wait up!" Ranma exclaimed, grabbing the offered thermos and Nuku
Nuku's hand. Saying his thanks to Kasumi on the way out, he sped off
along with the catgirl after Akane's receding figure.

Left alone, Kasumi put a hand to her cheek and thought, 'My, he's so
energetic and young... well, not too young... and he's got a cute
butt...'

Hearing a dull thud from behind her, Kasumi turned around to see her
father sprawled out on the floor in a dead faint. "Oh, my!" the eldest
Tendo daughter exclaimed, holding her hand to her face as her cheeks
burned crimson. "Did I say that out loud?"

Darn that forgetting to internally soliliquize.

Kasumi: That was like the time I accidently said out loud about the
little sisterly meeting I had with Nabiki.

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"Ranma, what are those boys doing?" Nuku Nuku asked, looking at the
crowd assembled at the school's gates.

(DB looks up and doesn't see a Yaoi tag. Must not be the first thing that
came to mind)

And you say I have an evil mind? ^_^

The onslaught of a mob of students running towards them reached
Professor Yamagata at that moment, knocking him through the window.
"AAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!" he screamed, attempting to grab hold of something
as he fell.

Some of the more concerned students looked out to check on their
accident-prone teacher.

"It's okay," Sayuri shouted out. "He fell into the pool." With that she
went to the group surrounding Ranma and Nuku Nuku.

Heh

Not completely original.  But it had to be written ^_^

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Akane didn't mind the commotion in the classroom much, since she had
been left alone to have her lunch in peace. Ranma and Nuku Nuku were
surrounded by various students, asking the pair questions on what
they've

they'd

"Nuku Nuku at Akane's house because Tendo girls want Ranma. Just like
other friends!"

Heh. She's only making things worse.

Nuku Nuku: How?  This means more people will want to be friends with
Nuku Nuku!

Hearing Nuku Nuku speak so ardently about her, even though they really
didn't talk much - other than that unfortunate bathroom incident - made
Akane feel ashamed on having thought so unfavorably of her guest. Maybe
they could be really good friends.

"What did you mean by '_Especially_ Akane'?" Daisuke asked, a large
part of him wanting it to be something more than friendship.

"Nuku Nuku and Akane real good friends! Akane even take bath with Nuku
Nuku!"

Well, that's not unheard of in Japan. It's only if Nuku Nuku elaborates

will

it be considered a bit on the scandelous side.

True.  Will see if something else can be added in here.

"W-Why, Cologne," Ranma stammered out, sweating profusely. "F-Fancy m-
meeting you h-here."

"It's... it's a mummy!" Daisuke exclaimed, the first student to see the
newest arrival clearly.

The purple-haired girl who had made the hole in the outer wall bonked
the boy on the head with one of her bonbori. "It no Great-Grandmother's
fault she fall in Spring of Ghoulish Talking Dried-Up Old Monkey!"

Heh. Evil.

This can be completely blamed on Corwin ^_^

"Wives?!" the whole class screamed in surprise, as Ranma began to sweat
worriedly once again, shifting from one foot to another nervously.

"Umm... only the girls are here, right?" Ranma asked, not wanting the
situation to be worse than it already was.

"Of course," Cologne answered with the same smile as before, eliciting
a small sigh of relief from Ranma.

Heh

Unfortunately, for Ranma, while the guys are here, _he_ is...

No matter how much she thought about it, Nuku Nuku couldn't understand

why it was wrong for her to play with all those females and then kiss
them. Even Akane, who wasn't an Amazon, liked to do that. If it was
okay in Nerima, what was so bad about it? But Ranma spent more time as
a human, and should know better. Well, better than fat-old-man.

Ah, so she's starting to understand Ranma now.

A bit ^_^

"There's more. You know that boy who was next to her in the morning?
Well, his name is Ranma Saotome..." Nabiki made a dramatic pause,
before dropping the bombshell, "and he's Nuku Nuku's fiance."

Time stood still, waiting for Kuno to pick himself off the floor and
face Nabiki, who was smirking like a fox. "_What_ did you say?" he
asked incredulously. Surely his love could not be trapped by one who
doesn't

didn't

"Kuno-chan? I said he could choose one, if not _ALL_, of us to be his
fiancee."

Pausing in his rant, Kuno replied to Nabiki, "Why, certainly he would
never be of mind to choose Kasumi as she is older than him along with
that her purity would destroy evil such as him."

Heh. I like that bit

Thanks

Taking a good look at the unconscious man next to him, Toshu,
synchronous with those in the bar that had their attention caught by
the events outside, overturned his cup and allowed its contents to flow
onto the floor.

nice touch.

Had to include a bar scene (or two ^_^)

Daisuke and Hiroshi followed them to class, not taking their eyes off
the catgirl for a moment. Several moments later, the pair of boys
crumpled onto the floor with matching groans, having walked into the
banisters at exactly groin-level on the first stair-case.

Nice touch.

Can be mutually blamed on Brian (for giving that comment in his C&C)
and Corwin (for adding it to the fic) ^_^

Five minutes later, when the wait was almost unbearable, the teacher
finally entered the classroom, followed by several girls. Upon seeing
their faces, and the clothes they all wore, Ranma, very close to
fainting, froze in his seat.

Thought they would outfox him this time.

Yup, they entered without making noise, thus catching him off guard.

Nabiki's thoughts returned to the present just in time to catch a
glimpse of Kuno's back, as the teacher sent the upperclassman outside
for interrupting his class. Seemed someone

It seemed someone

Will change

Putting on her most charming smile, Nabiki whispered throatily, leaning
towards him, "Are you sure about that, Ranma? Working with me can be
quite... rewarding."

"Uh-huh."

Heh

Ranma can be quite... blind when it comes to girls ^_^

Nabiki cursed internally, and decided to use her ultimate attack - the
dreaded puppy-dog eyes. "But..." she said, sniffing, "I wanted to work
with you so much." Nabiki's lower lip started to tremble. "Just a
lonely girl wanting to spend some time with her fiancee... and make
some money while they're at it..." A tear made its way down Nabiki's
cheek. "And you... You're not even listening!"

Heh, again

Nabiki's finding out how frustrating it can be to get money from Ranma
^_^

"Only one million? Are you sure that's enough?" Ranma asked,

Now I wonder how he got those kind of funds.

That will be shown... just not sure when ^_^;

Amusing. Prose flowed well. Seems like you're setting up things. Eager to
see the next chapter.

Next chapter will have more action.  Decided not to say how long it'll
take finishing chapter 3 since I seem to be writing rather slow ^_^;

Thanks a lot for the C&C!

Ginrai
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