I love those, especially Kasumi's and Nabiki's -- she has a real flair for
senryu.  You've really kept everybody in character.

I came up with the first of these a long time ago when I was playing around
with storm and sun images for Ranma and Akane.  It's a bit of a stretch to
fit them into the idea of rain, but...


Red sun at morning
storm clouds struck with crimson fire
ready for battle.

	(Ranma -- yes I know it's much too articulate.)


Impetuous storm,
once I run out into it
I cannot go back.

	(Akane)

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"In the Olympian courts Love laughed at
Death, because he was unsightly, and because
She couldn't help it, and because he never
did anything worth doing, and because She
would."

     --Lord Dunsany, "Death and Odysseus"

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