PansutoTarou5925@aol.com wrote:

<< > Besides, only a dunce would have realized that the wall of
 > swirling darkness advancing upon them was a bad thing. >>

D'OH!

There were others like that throughout chapters 9 and 10.  A careful
reread should find them all, or at least most of them.  But it could be
made to work...just not in that situation.

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Urd looked at Skuld, and sweatdropped mightily.  "You ordered *how*
much Dark Fudge Ripple?"

Skuld was too far lost in anticipatory joy to hear, or care.

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"We've only got fifteen seconds before this battleship blows!"

"Relax, Tenchi.  Washu will have the portal to us in time."  Ryoko
glanced to the side  "See?  Here it comes now."

---

Kuno hacked away another vine before it could reach his throat.  "I
shall have words with my sister about her experiments.  Sasuke!  Where
is that egress you promised?"

"Patience, master.  Cologne said this spell would take a few moments to
invoke."  The ninja backflipped over a venus flytrap doing a credible
imitation of a juggernaut.  "These plants require daylight to be
active, correct?"

"True.  Unfortunately, sunset does not come for another six hours, and
I fear I lack the stamina to last that long at this rate."

Sasuke watched the magical concoction he had tossed to the ground erupt
into an oncoming area of dark.  "Then let us embrace the Summoned
Night."

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"What is *that*?"  Amelia shielded her eyes to peer at the horizon.

Lina whipped out a telescope and peered through that.  "I don't know.
It's a wall of some kind, headed our way.  Could be good, could be
bad."

Gourry shook his head.  "Wall of mazoku.  I've seen it before.
Definitely bad."

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See?  It works in other situations just fine.  ^_^;
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