Some cultures consider "twins" to be bad luck.
And, in cases of Royal Succession, a "twin" may cause
unwanted complications.
While an "Evil Usagi" is certainly possible the author
can avoid the entire situation by having the negitive
influence be from a more general source. If, for
example, there is a tradition that twins in general
are a bad omen or the birth of twins causes some real
problem in determing the succession (there's only one
silver crystal after all) . . .
Rather than having "Evil Usagi" mistreat the child for
unknown reasons, the entire court punishes the child
in subtle and perhaps not so subtle ways. You can have
the same effect without having to build a back-story
that explains "evil usagi" or perhaps why usagi is
evil ONLY to this child.
Alternately, there might be a legitimate reason that a
twin birth is considered bad (perhaps it disrupts the
power of the crystal?) In which case usage/NQS may not
have a choice at treating the child badly. The twin
birth may affect the crystal, which in turn affects
NQS emotions.
The important thing is to make the characterization
believable, no matter what the reason.
--- the DragonBard <dragonbard@hotmail.com> wrote:
From: "ffml_use" <ffml_use@hotmail.com>
To: <ffml@anifics.com>
Subject: [FFML] [fanfic]New Ranma/SM crossover Idea
(it's just something
that been going around in my twisted mind)
Date: Sat, 15 Sep 2001 18:56:30 -0700
I think this fic should be call "The Brat, the
Bastered and the Brain."
for this tile is appropriately named. Be fore
worned this idea lays
heavily in the alternate catagory for Ranma.
Not that there is anything wrong with that.
The story starts off with Ranma being born as the
second child of
Neo-Queen Serenity. Now for some unknown reason
Usagi is
uncharacteriscally cruel in her treatment of her
second child.
Okay, stop right there.
Now, if you are going to be trying to change
Usagi/NQS like that, you better
have a very good explanation why she is changing her
usual pattern of
behavior so much.
If you don't, then this fic will likely have no
readers beyond the pro-evil
Senshi,' and 'I hate Crystal Tokyo' crowd.
As you yourself said, Usagi is being different to
her son. Answer the
question why, and find a way to make it believable,
and you have a story.
If not, people won't read, or enjoy, it as much as
otherwise.
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