And here is the end

    Fate and Destiny: Epilogue

    From Dream to Legend

Can't say I understand this one. It's just gibberish to me.

(And you would have had to follow my previous C+C's to get that one. ^_^)

    ------------------------------

    And so it came to pass that, this time, the Once and Future King did
not meet his Destiny until his Fate was fulfilled.

Of course, his Fate was simply to get to a roll of bathroom tissue for his
sister, after which he died in a tragic steamrollar accident, proving that
not all Once and Future Kings have interesting Fates in store for them.

    The women were both exceedingly fair, one light, the other dark, and
walked on each side of the man. The first had a gown of purest black,
contrasting the second's stark white, and the man's stoic gray. The man,
while not great of stature, was great in presence, seemingly
unstoppable, yet restrained, and made no move to force the King's
passing, until he was ready.

Basically, the man was whipped by his wife. Lacked the spine to do anything
without her approval. A true wuss.

    Translations:
    Chapter titles:

    Dormio Animus -- Soul to sleep (Slumbering spirits)
    Suscitatio -- Awakening
    Infirme Conscius -- Weak consciousness (Faint awareness)
    Plene Evigilo -- To awaken completely
    Inchoatus Ludus -- Only begun/unfinished game (First move/End game)

See. Got every single one of them right. :P

    That being said, I think that, however it worked out, they found
happiness, and love with one another. And that's what's important, in
the end. Being happy and loved... what more is there?

Woman of loose morals and booze. Preferably excesses of both.

Nice work. Chapter 5 seemed a little rushed, but the Belldandy making the
scarf for him since she knew who he was was a ncie touch. Very minimalistic,
but that was what you were going for. Would have preferred seeing more of
Megumi's thoughts later since you dwelled on them so much earlier. Not sure
whatelse to say other than nice work overall.

D.B. Sommer


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