Hi all! I could really use some pre-readers for a couple of my stories I'm
writing and re-wrting. It won't all be anime, but the non-anime fics are
going to Fanfic.net, so I still need them proofed. I need a couple people
who can edit dark and sometimes lemony fics. I included a part of a chapter
to Dead Souls.
*Shrug* See what you think.
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"Good, you're awake. I was afraid I would have to wait longer than that
before you came to."
The first thing Rei heard was the soft, precise voice that was neither
warm nor cold. It was simply blank, almost as if this whole predicament
bored her. Rei slowly moved her arms, feeling the bonds cut into her
wrists and the dull throb that resulted on her temple causing pain
through her head every time she stirred. Her fuzzy vision started to
clear and the person who had just spoken reassured her no more than the
voice. It was Usagi, and yet face seemed more angular and uncompromising.
The lips were still full, but no longer pouty. They seemed dangerously
sensual under the upturned nose. But it was her eyes that caught Rei's
full attention, as they had back at the shrine. They seemed cut from blue
diamonds. Just the pure maliciousness made Rei draw in a shocked gasp.
Rei's reaction seemed to amuse this woman who looked like Usagi. The
corner of her lips turned up and her eyes seemed to flash. "You find my
looks odd, Rei?" Again that frustratingly bland tone.
"Who are you?" Rei meant to sound assured, but all that came out was a
tremulous query in the face of that wrongness.
"Why, I'm Usagi of course. To whom else could this disgustingly innocent
body belong to?"
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~Sera Luanma
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