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From: "noirchloe" <noirchloe@nyc.rr.com>
To: "FFML mailing list" <ffml@anifics.com>
Sent: Saturday, December 08, 2001 14:31
Subject: [FFML] Ranma[Continuation of sorts] The Assassination of Nabiki
Tendo, Chapter 3

He made it downstairs to the phone, walking past both his {sons-in-laws :

sons-in-law},

knowing that they would take up positions with his daughter and follow

him.

"I can have the {paper work : paperwork} drawn up and ready on our end."

"Everything will be ready."  Mr. Fujiyama placed the receiver down.  He
needed to get a lot of {paper work : paperwork} settled by dinner, and

there were also the

plans for his much needed vacation, first class, thanks to the generosity

of

Mr. Mori.

She walked around the apartment, curious {of : about} the silence, until

she spotted a

short note on the table.  All it said was that Kiyoshi was out running
errands and would return shortly.

She thought back to the folders she had seen on her birthday.  Ranma had
been Alpha, the e-mail she had been shown confirmed that, but what she

{didn'

t : didn't} understand was what it was doing in Homohato's computer

system.  Her

second question was what was in the other folders?

Genma Saotome walked out of his office building, he had been blissfully
ignorant of the happenings to the Tendo family until Soun's phone-call.
They had talked for hours until Soun had {berate : berated} him into

visiting and coming

up with a plan.  If they hadn't so much history together he would have
refused, he was going to refuse until Soun had mentioned his wife Nodoka.
If nothing else he had to keep his whereabouts a secret from his wife.

Soun Tendo was busy being a grandfather, he had taken out his old game

board

in anticipation of his friend arriving.  He was passing the time teaching

{hi

s : his} grandson how to play, trying to refocus his mind with this

action.

"Abe, Shissio Abe.  And I assume you're, Kasumi?"

I'm surprised he gave her his actual name.  He'll probably have to have her
killed now if she can't be silenced the same way Soun has been for the last
decade.  That would probably mean the entire family and Genma would have to
die as well.


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