I'm very glad to see you are continuing this.

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From: "Christopher J Olsen" <GAMERS@prodigy.net>
To: <ffml@anifics.com>
Sent: Sunday, January 06, 2002 01:01
Subject: [FFML] [Ranma/SMJ][Lime]Strangers in a Strange Land Chapter 15

    Nabiki gave Lorelei her gentlest smile.  "You were great.  I don't
think anyone else would have agreed to do this.  I can't tell you how
grateful we all are.  Akane and Ranma would thank you too, if they ever
found out what you did for us.  All nine of {us, marionettes : us, the

marionetts : us marionettes} with Maiden

Circuits, owe you big time for this."  Lorelei started self-consciously
wiping herself down with the towel as Nabiki picked up her clothing and
brought it to her.  "Do you want some privacy while you get dressed?"

    Nabiki sighed with a nod.  "Now I'm starting {to! : to} understand a

bit of

how you must have felt earlier today.  This isn't something you normally
talk about... at least, not quite so frankly."  She looked thoughtful.
"On second thought, maybe it's just how artificial this feels that's
bothering me... I don't really know."  Nabiki shrugged.  "It doesn't
matter.  I really have no reason to feel so shy about it, I just do."

    Ranma blinked.  "Master whating?"

    Akane looked incredulous.  "You don't have any idea, do you?"

Just think of it as another martial arts technique.  You'll be a master
baiter in no time.

    "Masturbate?"  Bloodberry finished for her.  "Actually, it was
Lorelei-san."  She blushed slightly.  "We... really {own : owe} her one
for doing this... and keep this to yourself, okay?  Lorelei doesn't want
anyone knowing about... what she had to do to help us out."  She smiled
faintly.  "We really owe her a lot for this.  I can't wait to try some
of this stuff out on Otaru."

    Akane blinked twice, then smiled.  "You almost look like you're
glowing, {sis : Sis}.  I'd wonder at the reason, except I already
know."

    Nabiki patted Lorelei's shoulder gently.  "Nonsense.  I know you
better than that.  Things have just {bee toon : been too} busy the last
week."

    Lorelei sighed.  "I suppose that IS true."

    Nabiki looked in interest at the image on the monitor.  "So that's
Tiger's maiden circuit?  I suppose those red areas are
{signifigant : significant}?"

     Lorelei looked around.  "No, not really, what do you...."  As her
eyes passed over where Tiger was resting, she spotted a
shadow in the darkness above.  A human shadow.  "Who's there?"  The
shadow vanished almost immediately, whoever it was
jumping down from their perch in the roof beams and out of sight.

    Lorelei hesitated.  "I don't think so... Baiko, {had : has} the
investigation team assigned to the Kunos found anything significant?"

It will be interesting to see how Ranma and Marine get along.  It sounds
like Lime's and Ranma's emotional development are at a similar level, so the
interactions are likely to be similar.  Akane will probably not be amused,
though Nabiki is likely to be.




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