Hiya!

Sorry I was slow in replying... I've been back home on vacation, and 
fanfiction's been kinda far from my mind (as opposed to Canadian beer and 
baskets of chicken wings....)

BTW, thanks for the detailed feedback... I'll check over your suggestions.  
The fic's been on the sidelines for a few weeks now, so I'll be revising it 
soon before putting it aside for good.

        To her surprise, the man smiled as well.  "Oh, I most certainly 

hope > > he  _does_ catch up to you, my precious Key.  I hope he finds you, 
and keeps > >you safe."  He released his grip.  "Now go, little girl.  Run 
away!"

So Akane is Dawn Summers? AKA 'The Key' in Season Five of Buffy theVampire 

Slayer.

Hmm... I dunno.  I don't get Buffy over here.  When I first came, I made an 
uncle tape and mail Buffy to me, but he stopped an episode before the end of 
the 'Adam' season.  (I _still_ haven't seen how that all turned out!)  Dunno 
much about the whole Dawn thing.  Then again, I plotted most of LtCF out a 
few years back, so Buffy hadn't been much of an influence.

Apart from that, nice fic. Interesting to see how contemporary Japan
lives.

Many thanks, and again, thanks for the feedback.  I'm not sure if I'm giving 
a very accurate representation of Japan or not... but the night life here 
(especially in the big cities) sure is a riot.  When I went home for the 
holidays, I couldn't get over the fact that everything shut down at 2-3 am.  
Weird.

Later,
Mike

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